I like the way you're giving us snapshots of the Buu saga through the eyes of Bulma and Vegeta, though I wish there was a little more interaction between the two. Of course, once the tournament started they wouldn't see each other, but a little more dialog or something in the first scene would have been nice. Perhaps once Buu has been defeated there will be a little more description of their interactions as their relationship finally becomes stable. Keep up the great work, I'm really enjoying this story so far.

You picked excellent scenes to use for showing the growing, changing relationship between these two without giving us a play by play of the whole Cell Saga. I really liked the struggle both Vegeta and Bulma were feeling in the beginning of the chapter, knowing they should stay away from each other, but unable to actually do it. This was a great chapter.

You've done a really good job of capturing Vegeta's character. A lot of the B/V get together fics turn him into a puddle of mush when he's with Bulma, but you managed to have him still proud, defiant, and (just a little bit) bad.

Brilliant. You picked the perfect moments to describe. Short, but great. I have nothing else to say, I'm just in awe! Curious on how you'll continue this. You WILL continue, right? ;)

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There's nothing to add to that. You managed to keep them both in character, you don't know HOW much I appreciate that, haha.

That's Vegeta for you. His thoughts were great. Some fics about this subject are way off, but this makes sense to me! Stubborn, rude, annoying Vegeta. How we all love him. Great chapter!

That, was good. *nods* i hope you write more, because you can really capture a character better than others. well done!

It was a very nice story, well done!

I loved this! It was in true Vegeta form. You definitely describe Vegeta's POV during these events from the series. Very well done.

that was really neat. i liked it a lot. Ja ne.

The answer to your question of if you should write more is very simple: YEAH!

This is great!

that really seems like it could actually happen om the show! its reall, really kool... please finish it soon! _

That was really good! vegeta's character is totally there! ...:p!

that was sooooo good i can't even believe it! please please please write more about when trunks was little and stuff...i think i might cry...but i just went to see the very first Harry Potter premire so i feel damn good...i give that movie a 67 out of 10...and 5 stars...go and see Harry Potter!

Good job! This is great!