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Dragon-Ninjagirl
2009-09-13 . chapter 14
In the last weeks I've been reading the whole Deux Claret series and I'm totally in love with it *__* couldn't stop reading!
Just wanted to tell you how much I love these stories and your writing style. You're a great author!
Keep it up and update soon! ;)
Bookworm Gal
2009-09-06 . chapter 14
I just found your stories. Love them. Starscream is my favorite Decepticon simply because of the Armada series. Alexis is so cool! Jade is going to be so ticked off with how they messed up her wedding night. Poor Decepticons... Starscream is going to do something stupid, isn't he.

Love all the Armada references. Wonder... if Sam ends up meeting Galvatron at any point, is he going to start babbling like he does it ROTF? Because that was impressive babble. Can't wait.
Horsehugger626
2009-08-06 . chapter 14
I'm moved. Most fanfics (especially TF ones) I have read are cheesy, a near rip-off of the original, and/or very short-lived. This one has definitely far out-lived all other fanfictions. When this story is done I highly recommend pursuing publication or other forms of putting your literature into mainstream media.

This story contains facets that in other pieces of literature would normally seem cliched and worn out: villain(s) seeking world domination, interracial (or intergalactic) marriage, unfulfilled desires for another person, and even a unexpected pregnancy.But not so with this series. These thousand year old factors have been spun and mixed together into an excellent storyline with subplots that keep it constantly alive and kicking.

My personal favorite to see by the end is the birth of Mikaela and Sam's first child. I pray one cliche will not be used though. The scenario of the mother disappearing into a room and coming out with the child is extremely depriving of what could be an emotionally (and story accelerator) scene. I also hope that Alexis and Skyfire return unharmed and safe. Can't wait for more!
Rishtalak
2009-08-01 . chapter 10
Sigh, why is it that whenever we rant at men, they start to wonder where it came from as opposed to actually LISTENING to us?!

Kudos to you Jade. Rock on!
Lady GryphonInia
2009-07-30 . chapter 14
I am so happy to read another chapter! Great work, love! As always ;)
akirisan
2009-07-29 . chapter 14
wow... that was amazing.. and i wonder what Galvatron will make to Alexis and Skyfire.. Starscream`s mate and friend.. OMG!
reginastar
2009-07-26 . chapter 14
Really good chapter. The discussion in Prime's office was really intense, it shows just how devoted everyone in the series, both humans and mechs, has become, and how everyone just wants to do what feels right, even though others may not agree. You can see a true hero in Sam, how he's matured beyond his years. It was rather odd that he'd choose that moment to tell his mom about the baby, and that Judy hadn't noticed Mikaela's pregnant belly during the wedding! But it was a funny scene. Leiana's courage in wanting to fight made me like her 10 times more! Also Ironhide's 'All in good time' made me crack up. I can easily picture those two charging the Cons together, with Sunny going nuts about it.

I actually thought Barricade's treachery had been discovered with the attack, but it seems he's still acting as a double agent, I hope he gets blasted to pieces by Ratchet! I feel so sorry for Jade, but I'm also curious about her obsession with having a 'perfect' wedding. It seems there is a lot more to her than meets the eye, she has some secrets of her own.

Also, I think I saw some foreshadowing when Mirage said that the Minicons can defeat Galvatron 'only when wielded by a deserving hand' made me think, who could be the lucky mech, and I inmediately thought of Starscream! But this is just me making up theories like a true fangirl LOL!

I'm so jumpy waiting for the next chapter, you mentioned a lot of things at the end that have me really excited! Best of luck to you!!-reginastar
Lecidre
2009-07-25 . chapter 14
So they're going to find the other minicons? Hope they can get to Alexis and Skyfire and rescue them on time. Meeting a revived Galvatron in a place full of Decepticons is surely a very bad thing for these two... And Skyfire is really a kind Autobot. Seeing him try to protect Alexis despite his own miserable state when Frenzy came in the cell really moved me. Lucky Frenzy, he'd definitely be stomped on the spot once he freed the prisoners if the Cybertronian the 'Cons had captured is Starscream... XD

Can't wait to see what will happen in the next chapter!
Lune
2009-07-24 . chapter 14
This is a very fantastic story, I am sad that it stopped for the time being D:
I need to read more, the pairings are splendid, the personalities are superb and sunstreaker and starscream make me laugh so hard and fall into a fit of giggles its wonderful ♥
I can not wait for your next updates c:

Thank you for writing such a wonderful fic ^ ~

_-Lune-_
Keeper101
2009-07-20 . chapter 14
holy heck this is so good how do you come up with this stuff! I know I sound like a suck-up but I love this book! ;D
Keep writing girl! U rock
BluePaintedFreak
2009-07-20 . chapter 14
can't wait;)
tlcoopi7
2009-07-20 . chapter 14
I hope that Screamer will rescue Alexis before Galatron gets her
Megatron's Blackfire
2009-07-20 . chapter 14
wow...just wow...

Sam, you really should have told your parents sooner about Mikaela, save yourself some dignity...and didn't they see her at the wedding? that baby-belly is hard to miss...

I would not want to be Alexis or Skyfire, personally, but I really think Skyfire should have flicked Frenzy across the room for the fun of it...would have made my day to see that happen.

I'm guessing that Ironhide, Rad, and Miles are getting the Starsabre sword. Maybe Sam, I don't know
Fiera Sabre
2009-07-19 . chapter 14
Ah! I didn't realize the next chapter would be up so soon!! I was quite elated when I saw the alert in my inbox. :D Great chapter, I can't wait for the next one! (Though I do realize that it takes time to write these things... (: )
weapon13WhiteFang
2009-07-19 . chapter 14
*Sigh!* Another glorious filler my friend!! I was jumpin up and down with excitment when I saw the posted update in my email box!

So Barricade's back, eh?... Damn!

... And Seraphim went missing as well? ... I dont know if I like the feel or sound of that.

What the hell is goin' on!!

*Rubs forehead* So many thoughts are goin through my skull! Ugh! I guess I'll have ta wait til Chapter 15 ta know what in sam hill is going on!

Good work Rosie!!
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