 xXGoth-NejiXx 2008-09-11 . chapter 1This story is pretty good, it could be a little more detailed and written but overall it is good, although I dont really like KakaSaku...or whatever...and i reckon you may have jumped them into a relationship too fast but still it is very good and I think one day sarah u should submit a story that u have written yourself so i can see how awesome you are at writing. |