great story my fave fairy tale would have to be cinderella lol but this moves that down to second yay

clay like Dedaria XD

OMG! THAT WAS SO TOTALLY AWESOME!! Of course i loved it! you wrote it really well! thanks so much! you exceeded all expectations! [and i have high expectations.lol] WELL DONE!

beautiful and so descreiptive! The ending was rather short but your use of adjectives is amazing!
I'm too lazy to login.
Good job! Keep it up!
-H.H.