Aw, this was nice. I love Aly and Nawat.

This was cute! Good job. Not many people do Aly/Nawat, and you did a unique one.

Very cute. I liked the last bit "It’s a sketch, maybe, but if she looks close enough she can find real color in the happiness that her husband put perfectly onto paper." You should maybe work on making it a bit longer though.

LOVED IT!
its so beutifully written.
very nice
~AliaraGen

Aww! I understand what he means about colour. You really can't replace the colours that the world has given us.

It's really cute, and captures emotion well. You can tell that Aly cares about him in the drabble.

-Katie