I lOve it!

Oh you know girl I definetly like this story no question about that! I loved the internal battle with Shadow not wanting to showcase any guilt over Johns. Off to read the other two stories.

Great as always! cant wait fer the sequal ^_~

Awesome ending!

Love it!...Can't wait for a sequel!

Nice job. I liked it. Can't wait for the next adventure!

I liked the ending and YAY for a sequel!

YAY! Shadow didn't die! Man, what an amazing story! Loved the writing style, the plot and your OFC. I cannot wait for the sequel b/c there are so many different questions I want answers to! Like what did Johns and Roderick do to Shadow? How does Riddick feel towards her and will they stay together? They have to stay together! And neither of them can die in the sequel! Sorry, got a little over-excited there.

Anyhoo, I think how you ended this was perfect. The part where you describe Shadow killing Johns b/c of the weight limit really rang true and was so well written! The ending was a great one without being sappy or OOC for a Riddick story. Can't wait to read the sequel!

Awesome ending can't wait to see what happens to Riddick and Shadow now, if they stay with Jack and Imam or make there own way after dropping of the two in New Mecca?

Nice chapter can't wait to see how you end this story and start the sequel.

YAY for the sequel! Filler or not I thought this was a good chapter.

woot! you are back! and bringing a sequl!

For a filler, this was a great chapter I loved how Riddick doubted himself on saving Jack. That just speaks a lot on his growth and Shadow how she wanted to let him know it was okay but didnt . loved that!

oh yay an update! can't wait to read more, hope you describe riddick and shadow's connection a little more in the next chapter!

O Riddick aka Vin Diesel!

not bad. not great as the some of the other chapters, but like you said it's a filler. fillers aren't that great just by name. glad you were able to get another chapter and going to finish it soon. it's always nice to see a good story finished. hope to see the sequel soon as well. good luck!