 Maya 2008-10-17 . chapter 1 That was really great :) I love Mia/Diego! I thought Mia got a little too weepy but I loved the fact that Diego took her home and was prepared to cook for her. It's nice that he takes care of her and automatically takes charge.
Harsh times for Grossberg though :(
Having little Maya in it just made it perfect! Well done! |
 princessphilomena 2008-09-16 . chapter 1Aww...this was so sweet - I nearly cried at the beginning
I loved how you captured the bit between Mia and Maya, it was so fitting and unique change from the usual Diego comforting Mia scene.
Brillant writing! |
 Red Rider 2008-09-09 . chapter 1 I think that by leaving Mia and Maya alone(even though he probably wanted to stay) Diego really showed how much cared. Good job on another well-written one-shot. |
 Smart Aleckette 2008-09-07 . chapter 1Yay, Miego~ 8D
This was nicely written, and everyone was in-character. I loved it. :) |
 Orangen 2008-09-06 . chapter 1...
I really don't klnow what to say, other than Diego, Mia, and Maya were all absolutely perfect.
That, and 3-4's ending seemed so abrupt, but you worked around that really well.
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I need tissues. In a good way.
...I think. |
 Kugi 2008-09-06 . chapter 1 This was amzing. I really liked it.
Good Job.
Uhm... what else to say?
Thank you for writing this. |