awe :) i love the letters between them! and i cant wait for more! I know you might have writers block cause i know how that is...but please? :D

BAHAHAHA I LOVE the Christmas carol you came up with! :D
Ah, I bet Lily will get a surprise next chapter...
Next chapter isnt the end is it? Because at the top it doesn’t say complete!! :O
And now I’ll have to wait! Hopefully you have some more chapters written?

:D:D:D::DD:D:D:DD:D YAY!! :D I’m glad Sirius was so understanding! I liked the way you got Lily and James to kiss!

I stand corrected! THIS is my most favourite chapter!! :D

Ahh i'm absolutely speechless!! This was definitely my most favourite chapter so far! :)

:O I knew it! :’( still, its amazing...and ever so captivating! Please update soon! :D and wow, I love how even in distress James is the perfect gentleman.

Woo! I cant wait to see from James’ POV, although I think it’ll tear me apart! :(

The ‘you have poo on your shoe, and ah crap’ line made me laugh!! Still I feel soo bad for james and I don’t like how lily is torn, but I suppose it makes for a more interesting story...either way i'm still captivated...keep up the amazing work and cant wait for more!

Poor James!! Even though i'm dying inside, this story is beautifully written and I am completely captivated!! You have to update again soon and continue this!!

GAH! This is killing me!! I want Sirius and Lily to just be friends...but gah, you write it so well!! Hopefully James will get jealous?

What?! Sirius/Lily action? NO! Haha This chapter really sucked me in but i'm against Sirius/Lily unless they’re friends...or fake dating...i suppose I’ll have to read on! :)
Keep up the great work! And thanks for being such an awesome beta!

ugh and i was hoping she would end up with sirius but it's stilla good story! keep updating!!

Haha I love the ending there!

I love this fic!

Update soon!

YAY! Fight that writers block :P
Aww, they didnt kiss though, but still good chapter :)
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