thats so sad but its written so well! i really liked it and im not a jake fan so thats sayin somethin!

Hey! I'm reviewing :D If you didn't catch on :P
Lol Ok
So um...just throwing this out there...I mean ya, ok I'll say...
Dude, you should totally morph this one-shot into a full blown story.
Like...what if uh...Jacob found like another pack of wolves with more vampires lol that would be totally intense!
Yup...full story would be siq coming from this first chapter. It's such a perfect Intro. or Interlude I guess.
IT's just good all-round. My vote is, you make a full story :)
Oh guess what! Since I'm reviewing, I don't feel like IMing you, I have like twenty more sentences and an epilougue away from finishing one of my stories! I'm so excited!