 Queenie Z 2008-11-25 . chapter 1Guh!! I have a lump in my throat now. Wah. ;_;
Despite there being too many paragraph breaks (a lot of them could have been smushed together into one paragraph IMHO), I loved, loved, LOVED this. God, I want to hug Lloyd so bad. |
 ToS-fanatic15 2008-09-20 . chapter 1^^. i really really liked this fanfic!! ^^ it was a really sweet fanfic :) i really liked that stargazing |
 hamxham 2008-09-08 . chapter 1this is really really sweet... just simply amazing. i love it. |
 freakyanimegal 2008-09-07 . chapter 1That was percious. n.n So cute...I totally agree with all those sentiments. n.n |
 Cataclysmic Eclipse 2008-09-06 . chapter 1That was so pretty. And cute. And wonderful all wrapped up into one fic. Gah, I loved the ending, it was so sweet, I almost choked up. Very beautiful.
I love the simplicity of the writing style and delivery since it's a child's memories and it's Lloyd being reminiscent of them.
I also found it adorable that Lloyd tried to catch a butterfly for his mom and he didn't even think about getting hurt. It sounded like something a little kid would do, especially kid Lloyd. |
 Aemiz 2008-09-06 . chapter 1Aw, what a beautiful oneshot! I really loved it, especially towards the end when you added the part about the butterflies. You don't find to many oneshots these days with Lloyd's memories mainly focused on Anna. :) But yes, very beautiful oneshot. |