Oh, liking this! Any chance of an update soon?

Might I suggest feudal Japan as a possible future location? :) Would tie in well with Ron's MMP there, methinks.

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Mike.

Poor Rooster, didn't know what he was getting into. Far less sympathy for the corporal, of course, though he too probably qualifies as a dumb animal. Liked the romantic moments. Shego's plan isn't very subtle, yet. All in all, very good, worth a salute back.

oh boy, looks like things are going to get real interesting soon. keep it up Cap!

Capt, it looks bad for the Irish families. Will Shego get her revenge? Will Ron kick that corporal's tail again. Will Eveleen learn Kung Fu and is Kim going to go monkey all over the Brits? Well, it looks like we'll need another update soon.

Thanks again,

Larry (Sentinel 103)

Very good chapter, really discriptive. I liked it a lot.

Once again Kim and Ron are in a tight sitch, at least it's a good thing that Shego can't reveal too much. I hope to read more on this story soon.

keep up the good writing,
Reader101w

Oh, boy. Shego's making her play. Not good. Definitely not good for Kim and her possible future, with Ron and otherwise...

And Ron may have been right asout Josh from the start, considering his ancestor's actions...


Great as always, Captain! Keep it up!

Looks like trouble. Ruh-Roh! Looking forward to the next chapter. I salute you Captain. KingOAnime.

Quite the interesting chapter.

Pretty dicey for Kim, Ron and Kim's ancestors. Glad they got to kick a little Brit booty before this started moving into the scramble ahead.

But ya know, I bet Kim will look at Josh Mankey a bit differently from now on, should all work out in this sitch...

CB73

You give us a pretty good look at farm life in that time, Cap. Kim certainly knows how to deal with mischievous brothers and the rooster solution was masterful. Kim can take care of herself wherever she is. Why would Ron be using a pick to break up rocks? Wouldn’t a sledgehammer make more sense and be easier on him as well? Kim and Evellen dressed to the nines and impressing their boyfriends, too bad Shego has to crash the party.

Always glad to see an update on this!

A bit of a correction: "Thousands were starving to death as food was non-existent" is technically incorrect, as there was plenty of food in Ireland... just none for the Irish. During most of the five years of the Great Famine, Ireland was actually a net exporter of food. Whereas other countries similarly affected by the fungus (like Belgium) were able to halt the export of foodstuffs and thereby forestall widespread starvation by driving down prices, the Irish, lacking self-government, had no such capacity, and thus stood by helplessly as ships full of corn and grain that they themselves had grown set sail for England under heavy guard.

In the words of John Mitchel, "The Almighty, indeed, sent the potato blight, but the English created the Famine."

-John

Great story, very good follow up after 'Tunnel vision'.

You captured the characters really good. I also very much like your tendency to go with historical events, it's really cool that you put so much effort in benig accurate and using actual persons from different time periods.

I hope to read more of this story soon.

keep up the good writing,
Reader101w

Are you going to finish this story because it is really good.

Cap you told it like you had been there. Good story. I hope that Kim and Ron can help enough. Shego and blue boy are going to make it hard for them I can feel it in my toes.

Thanks Cap sorry about taking so long to review. I've been getting mine out too.


Larry (Sentinel 103)

Yes, Kim's ancestor Eveleen should look like her. Or is it that Kim looks like Eveleen? (Egg, chicken, chicken, egg...which comes first in the stream of time? ARGH!) Eveleen uses a phrase much like Kim's 'No big,' and she thinks Ron is handsome. Those two girls are clearly very much alike! I also like the fact that you have Kim and Ron having made some advance plans so that when Kim tells someone who they are and where they are from, Ron will already know what their 'backstory' is, should he get asked any similar questions. The United States declared war with Mexico in May of 1846, and Kim and Ron are in Ireland in October of 1847, so what Ron tells Mr. Murphy fits together nicely. All correct, Captain. Nicely done.

So, Shego is pumping Lieutenant Fisk for information, and has learned that Kim and Ron are in the area. Since Kim and Ron don't know for sure that Shego and Drakken are in this time period yet, that could give the villains a slight edge. But Kim and Ron seem to have fitted in with the Murphy family very smoothly, so they have acquired some friends who could provide some help, if it is needed.

May I make a couple of spelling points? It should be "shone" not "shown," and "cloak" not "clock." Also, I think that Eveleen should use "mum" consistently, instead of "mom."

We now have the scene set and the cast is all present (I think). Of course, there might be somebody else due to show up in Chapter 8 that I don't expect yet. No doubt you have some surprises planned for the future. For one thing, I have the feeling that this will not be the last stop on this journey through the time stream, before all return to the 21st century. I will be carefully watching for the next chapter to appear.

LTAOZFAN

"Them's my views, amen, so be it."
"Treasure Island," by R. L. Stevenson