 CartoonCalvin 2009-01-13 . chapter 2Great story, now how about finishing Toonschool, please! |
 BlooMan2 2008-12-19 . chapter 2Great ending to a great Nicktoons story. |
 Fortune Glyph 2008-12-05 . chapter 2Great ending! Great job! |
 SOLmaster 2008-12-05 . chapter 2Great that the Nicktoons got the Time Staff and stopped the Syndicate from messing up time! It was a great story. |
 BlooMan2 2008-11-16 . chapter 1This is awesome! I hope you update soon so I can see what time they go into next. |
 BuckSkywalker2012 2008-11-15 . chapter 1I cant wait to see pt 2 |
 dppokegirl23 2008-09-08 . chapter 1The Time Staff...you've just given me a suggestion!
Okay, Part Two can have the Time Staff sparking again and sending the Nicktoons and the Syndicate in different periods of time, away from each other. |
 sonicissocool112 2008-09-07 . chapter 1I have an idea. Have them go back to when Crocker was 10 years old and had Cosmo and Wanda as(Spazzes out like crocker) FAIRY GOD PARENTS! Okay? |
 Nicktendo Squad 2008-09-07 . chapter 1"Vicky is killed by an asteroid?" HAHA!! I freakin' cracked up after hearing that I'm sorry. XD DO MORE SOON!! |
 Fortune Glyph 2008-09-07 . chapter 1Wow! This is awesome! Let's hope the Nicktoons can stop the Syndicate! Update soon! |
 SOLmaster 2008-09-06 . chapter 1I hope the Nicktoons can stop the Syndicate before they alter the timeline. Update soon! |