Wow, such a strong story!

So that's what he says when you give him the level 4 limit break... It had flashed up too quickly for me to read. Now I feel bad for giving it to him. :( Poor Vincent...

Despite all that everyone in that game's been through, I really do think him to be the most tragic character in FF VII... and in any game or anime I've ever seen to date. You did a wonderful job recreating his feelings, his loss of control over the beast within him. Even those few words on the limit break reception... were so powerful.

Despite the melancholy of this work, (which is what makes it so GREAT anyway), you deserve my Anime Smile of Approval (tm) for this heart-tugging work of literary art. *_*

Wow. This was good. I like how Chaos proves to be the strongest limit attack of all and becomes hard to ignore for him. And don't feel alone. Vincent saying "I am becoming less human." had a HUGE impact on me too. Eeeep! I love Vincent!

yeah i thought that when i gave him chaos... hmmm even if your not human WE STILL LOVE YOU VINNIE!

like i said in school... I LOVE IT!...i really like the unique approach to the idea of the limit breaks and how you got the story to blend into the game!

EEEYAAHH! I loved it! *sniff* Poor Vinnie... I don't own FFVII either *kicks herself* but I hope to one day. That comment from Vincent struck a cord somewhere in me, too. Somehow I always figured he must really despise his Limit Breaks. I would too, if I had to go through that pure hell every time I transformed. Good good good story!

Oooooh. Heehee, I like it! Poor Vincent...I feel so sorry for him. Great lil story, real profound. Luv it!

NOOO! VINNIE IS TOTAL AND COMPLETE HUMAN! .

AMEN! This is GREAT, Queen Vegeta! I'm glad you told me about this! That line was rather... unnerving. VERY well written, not out of character in the slightest, and completely true to Vincent's tortured soul. Your stories always encourage me to write more. This is the kind of fiction that inspires. Keep writing, and don't let life get you down! -Kinneas

Nice approach to Vincent. Short, but effective. :) Great job.

Very good fic! The same quote from the game has made me even more fascinated with the man called Vincent Valentine. In this fic, Vincent was in character, which has been happening less and less frequently lately. I remember a time only a handful of people were fascinated with Vincent and wrote about him. Maybe we should be proud of ourselves, now that everyone seems to like him. But enough about me. Great fic, in character, and written exactly the way ole vampire boy himself would have written it!

shudders Ok, that was kind of a shivery, scary moment. What atmosphere... Poor Vince. somewhere in the distance we hear a muffled banging ?: Lemme out! Andrea: Shaddup Vincent!... I mean... uh... Deo: here's an idea, run. Andrea: Lattterrrrrrrrr dashes off

Why you... *tries to hit you only ends up hitting her screen* ouchy... This is immensly beautiful. Thats not why I'm trying to hit you. The quote "I am becoming less human" has set my little mind working. Working with idea's for a Vincent vignette. Would it be terribly terrible of me to somewhat expand on this beautiful fic? I have writers block, please! It's just so very beautiful. Wonderful job.

Woo! Thanks for telling me O.o. Whoa, I wasn't expecting that.. it's so cool! Ee! Great job, terrific. His response was also rather poiniant, upon giving him Chaos.. ;.;. Ahh, superbness.