Awesome :) 3

Short, but I liked it. Harry/Susan is my favorite pairing. Cheers! :D

Pretty good story

Good short story and thanks for sharing!

good short, you should make another with Harry and Susan as bounty hunters

monbade

Great story.

This was a very well written story..kudos.
I'll add it to my favs.

:)

cute (in my mind at least), direct, and nicely closed. Good job, and thanks for allowing this to be public.

M. Harry/Susan. And I liked the story. Not to quick with the romance, but not too dramatic. Nice going.

-demonicnargles

Great story, this was interesting.

There goes the last reassurance I had for my safety.

-made me laugh

of what I thought was Ginny, only to find out that it was a young Molly Weasley

-made me laugh harder

Thanks for writing!

Nice and thanks for writing.

Quality one-shot. The end seemed to come rather abruptly, moving from no Horcruxes to Voldemort being defeated, but then again the focus was on Harry and Susan's relationship with one another. Well done.

a couple of mistakes. but it flowed very nicely and a good idea. the only major biff i have is that the end scene seemed a bit to much of a jump. they had not found any horcruxes and all of a sudden voldy is dead and so are ron and remus... and where is hermione?

anyway, hoping you write more hp stuff.

ACRIMONIOUS! $4 word! Beautiful. However, I cannot forgive "irregardless". THAT IS NOT A WORD, KENSMINGTOON. Use "regardless" or "irrespective", they mean basically the same thing as the fake word "irregardless".

I also like the "Colonies" bit. YES, it's old school, but still. Can't beat insular nonsense.

I liked this oneshot. Not perfect by any means, and yes, a bit rushed at times. But quite enjoyable. Nice to see ya writing something these days.