 asdfjkl; 2009-09-29 . chapter 1 woah. i like it xD twisted, but good. i dn want to know though, how they managed to find...a happy medium between the two of them. and i'd totally go for a sequel! |
 Zatnikatel 2008-11-15 . chapter 1I’ve just read your new story so thought I would check out your others… had to read this a couple times before I ‘got’ it. It’s frakking mindblowing! What an awesome idea – and execution. |
 PADavis 2008-10-09 . chapter 1Chilling story - very powerful. Very disturbing. What an incredible twisted thing for Sam to do. Gah. Thanks for writing it.
Phoebe |
 spnMom 2008-09-07 . chapter 1Yikes, this was creepy, but good... Thanks! |
 Wolf-Phantom 2008-09-07 . chapter 1Wow...
That was insanely awesome! Love reading this, the whole time you have a vague idea of what's happening, and it becomes clearer as the story progresses. I liked it how I assumed they were in Sam's body, only to have it switched around! A very interesting concept, and scarily disturbing because I could almost imagine Sam doing this only to dicover the consequences later. |
 ToxicLullaby 2008-09-07 . chapter 1*Thud*!
Holy crap! How do you always do this to me?!?!? Not once have I ever left one of your stories without my jaw dropped! Excuse my french, but I just have to say...THIS IS ** AWESOME!
And it could work either as a oneshot or if you add to it. I like it as a oneshot because it leaves you with this feeling like you know what's going to happen, or at least have a pretty good idea, and all of the unsaid things are still present in the ending. Which, by the way , was perfect.
A quick glance in the rearview mirror and he had to admit an awful truth.
In a few more years nobody would remember Sam and Dean Winchester.
Not even him.
The best ending ever! I don't know why I like that. It has the mixed feelings of despair and victory. Dude!...
*Gives thumbs up before fainting again* |
 Linnie McCary 2008-09-07 . chapter 1This one was challenging. Dark and daunting, pain palpable, particularly in the beginning. At first I guessed wrong--the other brother "outside"--but you worked that out all right. Really liked your use of Ruby and Bobby. (Yes, Bobby as a professor is perfectly buyable.) Sad, though, the storyline...Thanks for sharing it. |