ok...I really liked this story, but OMG can Bryce be more of a creeper? Those were some insane stalker levels there...

Wow! This story was amazing! I loved Sarah/Karen's backstory! It was so unique yet it fit so perfectly! I absolutely loved everything that happened in this story! There wouldn't happen to be a sequel, would there?

chuck is a jerk in this story...but nice plot though!

Great AU fic. An excellent original plot to Chuck and a great way for Sarah and Chuck to meet. However Chuck's personality slightly strayed from the kind hearted bumbling nerd we all no and love...

Well I finished your great story. Couple of things I didn't care for. The story seemed to jump past times I would've expected conversations to happen. The intersect really didn't seem to have much of a roll in the story. I'm glad I read it all at once rather then over a year seeing that you kept C&S apart until the end. Some things I did like. You really fleshed out the characters and set up a wonderfully detailed world for them. I also enjoyed that you always told us who the actors/actresses were playing all of the parts. I liked your versions of Devon and Cassey more then the shows version. It was also an interesting change to have Sarah be the one pining for Chuck and not getting anywhere. Overall it has to be one of the best AUs I've read.

I just found this story, I'm not sure how I missed it. Usually when I find an old story like this I wait until the end to review, but I couldn't wait. The relationships you've set up are amazing. You've made Devon more then any other author ever has, he's hilarious. Casey is more likable and a little less gruff then usually written. GB is a more of a bitch then usual. So far Sarah is nice too, even though she has been in the story that much up to this point. I'm looking forward to the rest of the story with a very big smile.

wow crazy fic but a good one, spent 4 hours reading this! time to sleep!

Very good story, though some of the character made some decisions i don't see realistic. Other than that this was absolutely one of the best stories that got a complete different Chuck backround!

wow i am completely speechless that was epic!

Is there any possibilty of a sequel for this ?

THAT WAS AMAZING! One of my FAVORITE stories EVER! Well Done!

Wow, what can I say, wow. Perfection. One of the best stories I've ever read all the way through. The way you perfectly incorporated bits from the actual story as well as your own masterpiece, the perfect way in which you handled the chuck and Sarah relationship, the thrilling plot you coined which had us second guessing ourselves and constantly looking deeper, it was the ultimate story. Congratulations on a job truly well done...

Nick

Now that I've finished this I have to say its one of my favorite AU's in this fandom. I particularly enjoyed your approach to it with Chuck being in the service. I also liked your attention to detail when it came to the military stuff.

Thats just not cool, come on Carina may be hot but I'd like to think Chuck has enough will power to turn her down. Also I don't quite understand why they'd need a B-52 for that job considering how high the '52 would have to fly I don't think they'd get much in the way of great video or audio quality. They'd be better off in a Hawkeye or a C-130, or hell for the equipment you talked about before they could probably use a Pavelow or a Osprey but I suppose this is '03-'04 and the Osprey's weren't in service yet.

I gotta say I'm very much enjoying this story. As a fellow military nerd you've done exceptionally well with the technical aspects. I like how your maybe the only person who realized that Gen. Beckman being a one star means she couldn't actually be director of the NSA as thats a 3-star billet. I also like the way you had Chuck and Devon bonding. My one complaint so far is the treatment of Bryce, despite what some people feel for him I always liked him as a character except when he was anywhere near Sarah at which point I loathed him.