Good story.

Haha. I loved that story, Secondhand Faith. It made really appreciate this couple. I could totally see it happening.

haha you're wonderful. please write more!

hehe. Tayuya is such an interesting character. Nice. Kiba's most likely to be the one to bear with her.

okay, am i being slow tonight or is there just no "invitation?"

Ah, another crack couple to sate my appetite...

I loved this, really. I kinda wish Temari didn't kill Tayuya, (despite the dub making it look like she was just K.O'd) she has such an interesting and abrasive personality, you could play with her in different ways.

I believe she was IC in here, very delightful to read (I use as much curse words as she does also, so when I say "delightful" and you think "What about all the cursing?", I'm including the cursing too)

Lovely, colorful, VULGAR language...yup, you got a fav right here!

DAC

Har. Crack that makes me giggle is the best kind. :P

Like how you snuck Shikamaru and Temari's names in there. Just for funsies? Anyway, loved the descriptiveness and the in-characterization. Tayuya you potty-mouth. xD This is really a pairing I've never thought of before.

Hey, do you possess an AIM? I only ask because I have something I might wanna run by you. If not, it might just die. I dunno. :| Haven't decided yet.

~Pickles

AW! how cute kiba found his own little temari ;)! jk...but it was great :) loved the last line!! MUAHhahaha kiba is one smart cookie...well rather you are for your amazing plot :D!! great job!! def going to be a fave :)!! have a great wek! a few too many e's i know but i want ur week to be easy...corny yeah ok well im ganna go now... BYE!

I love you. So much.

Thank you for this! Not only did you write me something; you wrote me something cracky! In terms of pairing, I mean, and I know it must have been tough to write - God knows how I end up writing it myself!

It was lovely. You had Tayuya's anger and hostility right down. Her reaction to him kissing her was spot on.

Again, thank you. You made my day. ^^

lol, REALLY liked it! Tayuya definitely is one tuff cookie.