Oh forgot to add that i can't wait for the next part of this story!

Wow that was really good! made me laugh alot to, love your humor!

Please make her back story I think it would be awesome and I love the story so far.

very good story ...

in there any pairing for this ...

and KILL to CREATE ... no ofence but I fail Horrybly into finding the logic on that / guess it makes the story more interesting ... keep up the good work and hope the secuel is youst as good.

Lol, sorry, don't feel like logging in right now, too much work. I'm still Midnight Hell, as my names say, btw. Er...for some reason I can't remember lol. I seriously can't remember and I don't know why for the good points, but I do know it's good. Oh...wait, now I know! Literally, lol. I'm typing this, and the idea just pops into my mind, and now I'm typing out what I'm thinking...Yea, the good points were probably like how Ash could actually stand the thunder bolt attacks, and others. My god, Dialga-or was it Palkia?- sent them back, and now Ash is alone...What happened!? Oh yea, but something I do remember is that your story is really good. Um, when I said if you could place in like some of the other characters in your story, I meant to put them in? Er...like, add May and Max, Dawn and Paul, Drew and Harley somewhere in the story. Helping Ash or something? Ah, don't listen to me. I'm just rambling and have no clue what I'm talking about (only for the adding in characters, I can't explain things well, lol) But, I can't wait to see you update! xD
~Midnight Hell
- Woot! One more day 'till Spring Break!

this is by simply one of the best stories i've ever read... keep the good work and make sure the secuel is as good as this one

Mean, mean, mean, mean, plot twist cliff hanger! Now I have to stalk your profile in wait for Chaos Theory! By the way, a nice chapter, but I would be delighted to hear more of Ash's "training". *coughcoughtorturecough*

Awesome training scene... was there any pairing for this?

Well...
Damn.
Don't tell me. They sent him back in time to destroy the world to make the one they live in now. Ugh.

Woah...This is kinda...er...whacked up a bit? Lol, but I love it anyhow. Aw...I feel sorry for Ash and Mewto. Oh, can you try to put it almost everyone from all the regions, like Max, May, Drew, Harley, Paul, and others? 'Sides, I like stories like those, so they know and all that. Can't wait for the next chapter!
~Midnight Hell
- Btw, you make really good points in the story.

... He fainted?

-laughs- Ok now that is funny

I agree that Team Rocket's been blundering around for Giovani for much too long. I can't believe they're still stalking Ash after 10 seasons... That's around 3 years. >.< Just a weird question, but what did Giovani's laugh sound like?

Cool.

...the hat. xD!