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Feke07
2009-06-03 . chapter 1
oh wow this was an awesome story. Funny as hell!! i kinda wanted to see a kiss but I'm a hopeless romantic. lol. This was great!! Oh and the Catherine being blind thing...I scared my husband and daughter laughing so hard. lol
Kai
2008-10-06 . chapter 1
I LOVED this. I wish you would continue it into a chaptered fic. :)
Mila
2008-09-13 . chapter 1
I almost passed this story but I decided to read it and I am glad I did. This story is very real and the characters are portrayed really well. The story was a great read.Just so yo know I only do reviews if a story really caught my attention so this is a complement. I would like to see where this story goes or do you plan it just being a one shot? You should write more cuz its really good.If it will be a one shot, then I hope you write more Fanfic's for Gundam wing

Mila
ChilledFlame
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
I almost passed this story; I'm a major sceptic of alt. pairings with Relena. Back when I was more accepting, and less jaded, I read almost any pairing. However, I grew tired of Heero mistreating the helpless Relena, so she goes running into the nearest available pilot's arms. Thank you for not doing that.

I can't believe I enjoyed a Relena/Trowa. The level of maturity in this fic caught me off guard, especially how Heero and Sylvia's relationship was handled. Relena gave him the choice to grow as a person and choose who he wanted to be with. That sounds a lot better than her sobbing over how Heero was unfairly seduced by the harlot. It's unfair to compare this fic to that - this story is levels above the fan-created drama in other fics.

Relena's inner monologue was interesting. At some points she seemed all mature and proper, and at the other times, unsure and a teenager (which she is). Those two sides kind of conflicted and kept the introspective from getting dull.

You also kept Trowa IC, in my opinion. Relena wasn't a damsel, and he wasn't her Fabio. He's just Trowa... a little infuriating when he only provides cryptic or half answers, but alluring all the same because a person wants to understand him, and how he can keep that mask on.

I can't say I've been turned into a 3xR fan; however, I'll read another 3xR, if it's written by you. Honestly, impressed here!
TheDonutMistress
2008-09-07 . chapter 1
I'm your client, now, am I? ;) I like the sound of that.
I also like the sound of this. Actually, like doesn't do it justice. I love it. It's a pairing I'm strangely fond of and it's so nice to see it written, period, and nicer still to see it written well.
I enjoy the voice you've given Relena. She's refined as ever, good breeding and politeness coming through, even in her thoughts, but you also have some really funny tidbits in there too--some moments where she's very much like any other 17 year old girl.
You've done well to show her ache over the situation without making her pitiful. You've put her in a place that one wouldn't normally put her in, with someone one wouldn't normally put her with, and it just works so well.
I like how aware Relena is throughout this. She acknowledges her flaws, problems, etc. without being all "woe is me." You've matured her well, I'd say.
And of course, there's Trowa. Who owns at everything. Except pronouncing the word java correctly.
My curiosity for even more curious pairings...? Whatever do you mean? =P
More Trowa/Relena please?
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