oh wow. that is a great story but incredibly depressing...

That is so sadd!! But very well writen and I absolutely loved it and now I am wondering what happens next but that was the absolute best place to stop. You should definately write more of these! thx -B.

god that terrible! i don't mean its poorly writen or anything, its amazing. i mean how rose was treated. the way you totally antagonized the parents and made royce the savoir in they're eyes was great. u seem to be a feminist, somthing i admire beyond anything else. the ending was perfect for the story i must say. all in all, its art.

poor rose=(
i absolutely loved this one shot though and without a doubt am sharing this with my friends after this^-^
i loved your story china doll and can not wait to read the next chapter either!

This story makes me so Sad, so Angry, Its awesome! Its awful but it has a truth and a poetic beauty. You are really talented to be able to do that {I'm jealous}.I kinda wish you could write more but we all know how it would end. :)

Oh my. That was a wonderful piece, it was intense, dramatic, just wonderful. The flashbacks really added just so much to the story, and the whole thing just helps you to understand why Rosalie is the way she is and why she's so over-bearing and dominant. She didn't get to be before. Amazing job, superb writing. You should be proud of yourself! =D

This is amazing! The best story I've read about Rosalie. It breaks my heart to see her like this. I love this story!

heartbreaking. exquisite.

Damn.

I don't even read Twilight, and I love this fic.
I don't even like deep meaning behind stuff, and I love this fic.

...dammit! You're good XD.

My god... that is deep! you are a great writer and i love this story. It is so abnormal for someone to write from Rosalie's point of view but you catch it perfectly!

wow.
heart renching.
i loved it.
youre an amazing writer.

this moved me!
cullen cookie for you?

That was so sad. =(

Aww u really made me feel sorry for Rose :-( poor rose

this was good. I liked how it went back and fourth. Yet again, you impress me! good job.

This story was so emotive, the flashbacks were very effective! great work!