Ah, it's getting better!! Update soon!

Ah, we're getting somewhere now! I really like reading this story so far!

So far so good! I like this story; it has me hooked already!

WE;; KAGOMES PERSISTANT! LMFAO! BTW FOR SOME REASON FF ISNT SENDING ME UPDATES ANYMORE CAN U SEND ME A EMAIL/PM/REPLY REVIEW TO ME PLZ:)

I can't wait for the update hopefully inu will lighten up some ^-^

Yup Kagome's starting to get him more open no matter how long it takes ^^

please update soon ^^

It's good, here's what I personally think should happen (my opinion). Kagome should have a big personal secret from her past, like her father use to beat her and her mom left her & Sota. She now lives at the shrine with her grampa. Sango knows bcause Kagome would run to her house as her dad beat her. She knows what its like for him to be like this bcause, she use 2 also be like that, after her father was arrested when she was like 9 or 10. There's then a talent show and she sings This Is Me, from Camp Rock, InuYasha along they way slowly softens towards her until he says "You don't understand at all!!" And she replies, with tears in her eyes "Yes, I do." Then InuYahsa learns from Sango about it and he's shocked and Kagome avoids him. At the talent show, her father is in the audience with a gun, he escaped from jail & is going to kill her. She sings the song & dedicates it 2 InuYasha. After singing, her father shoots her. Goes to hospital and mushy scenes follow as InuYasha relizes he likes her and asks her out.
What do u think?

Interesting. Please update soon!
-d101

THATS GOOD A LITTLE SHORT BUT I LIKE IT

Awz!

Aw! What happened to my boo, Inuyasha? Update soon please!

oh thats good i like it update soon

Wow! Great start to the story! I hope you choose to continue...

I enjoyed your story. sure.

YO I LOVE THIS SO FAR PLZ CONTINUE!