Guess who just watched "The Intruder" :D Why, yes, that would be me...

Anyway, this is brilliant, Darsy! You're so great with these characters, with bringing them to life in this scene. I love Rodney dwelling on the scientific method, and the bit at the end about how "Princess Bride" has better quotes :D

The whole story is just...wow. Great work!

Oh, so Rodney...nice! Like John's view too.

This was great. I love how you kept the characters IC and still managed to make it realistic. I humor in this is amazing -- I love the part where Rodney thinks John is going to punch him. And the end with the quotes? Absolutely brilliant.

The only thing is I don't think this is a 'K' rating -- it seems more like 'T' or 'M' (especially for the last parts).

Very nicely done, though!

Oh, I really like this!