kawaii!

aw cute

Awe that was cute ^^

Great job turning naruto into tennis!

CUTE!
You should make a sequel!

great writing. I loved the whole 'tennis' theme, and the ending. and Neji fixing her ankle.

wow. i would never expect that. but it was good!! realy good!! update soon please!! :DD

I like it - it's not too long, not too short, and it's fun. Your characterizations of Neji and Tenten are nice and accurate, too. But I feel like it's lacking some...romantic substance, I guess you could call it. It doesn't really seem to me like there's much provocation for that kiss at the end - I mean, yes, they do make up, but I don't really feel the attraction. I'm not sure what you could add in to correct it, though; it could be just me, since I know you've done that very well in some other stories. But overall, I like.

aw, i love this story! even though i have pretty much no idea how to play tennis, i got pretty caught up in the description of their game. it was intense! and the ending was really sweet. it made me smile.

aw! I'd kinda like to see a follow-up to this. It was very cute.

yaya! this was uber kawaii XD

loved it!

love the tennis setting and differnt schools/rivals theme. matches them well. and yes, soo cute

very cute
ur very talented

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cute cute X)

Aww, that was cute. ^^ I especially liked Jiraiya's comment on Neji's way of showing affection. XD