Very good read. Make you wonder about how exactly they would have coped after the war. Couldn't have all been sunshine and daisies, huh?

Seriously, you should continue it. It's really nice and the diction is pure beauty.

wow...maybe consider doing a sequel? or making it longer by continuing?

to me it left me with a lot of questions...like did he like her and was saying all of that as a facade in front of his friends and to get her attention? what was his true motive? what will happen next? will they continue or will this be a one time night?

Beautiful and so sad. I'm not used to angst anymore. This was rough but I loved it. Great imagery and the rain, I loved the rain. Interesting that maybe Draco always knew it was coming to this. Maybe he was pushing it toward this. I'm glad that, at the last moment, he checked that it was okay. Without that, it would have seemed quite hopeless and maybe too depressing to enjoy but his check, his presence of mind to still care about her wishes, that made it perfect. Great job.

i agree.. i like it... well done... there was another i read where Hermonie preceived that Malfoy needed release and made herself avalaible for him and it has the same feeling as this. desparate need for security and assurance that there is normalsy and stability out there.. something anyway.. may not have the correct words of feeling but hope you understand what i mean.. thanks. well done.

I love fluff!

It's a very pulse racing, heart-stopping, kinda intensity. It's very urgent but final. Good job

lovely.

Write a sequel!

I definitely enjoyed this, it's desperate and dark, just like they would be after so much trauma.

Well done.

I loved your descriptions of their eye contact. It's the best I've read so far. Nicely written. I like the tone. Good job overall.

hot steamy and thoughtful! beautifully wrote! love iot!

best. a closure would be great

This was good. Accurate emotions, given the time context. Interesting that you thought the end of the story would have Ginny dead. :D