 Jacky-The-Ripper 2008-09-13 . chapter 1I can over look the shortness of the story and it's fast pace. But what I can not over look is LuLu's line. "I 'secretly' love you."
It's not much of a secret anymore, is it? It just sounds cheesy and doesn't make sense.
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