This was beautiful, I love it from start till finish. My heart stopped for a moment reading it, that's how good it is.

Hmm... Interesting.
Kind of hm... in the end... That hmm I can't even explain. I guess as long as his intentions were good...

Oh damn! You beat me to it! I was planning on posting something like this after I finished the current fanfic I'm writing right now! Anyway, pretty nice. Good emotional description. I was thinking of pretty much the same ending though the first half of my fic would have been different. But that would've been just plain weird if we thought of the exact same premise.

Anyway. GOOD JOB!

Wow that definately cooled me off after reading your "New Love". It is the complete opposite, sad and heartbreakingly beautiful. Really well written.

There are just some logical questions nagging at me. But since timetraveling never really was all that logic, I think that is ok. And with materia involved the need for logic fades even more. :P

That was beautiful and I am speechless.

Nice...it looses its impact somewhere...I'm not sure how; wish I could say...but still, I enjoyed it. Thanks for the read.

Holy ** you have me goose bumps! Seriously, that was freaking awsome! That was an amazingly brilliant idea. Thanks for writing it, it is wonderful!

ah, tragicaly beautiful *-*
but I hoped Cloud would just pull her out, not take her place =/

Wow. Lovely writing. You stirred emotions effectively.

Emotion-stirring factor- 9/10
Visualization- a really bad 5/10 The emotions were done carefully, but can you make me see it, Drake? Sora G. Strife, signing off for now.

It's so sad...nice work.

Wow...I don't know why nobody has reviewed this yet. It was so...beautiful. And I'm not even a fan of Clerith...and yet...Wow. I had to fave this. I...want to cry now. :'(