 leyu02o.O wait leviathan02 too 2009-09-19 . chapter 1awh it was so sweet! so cute! great job! |
 shadewatcher 2009-06-20 . chapter 1too cute! they're my fav couple. soo good together. ^_^ |
 Give-Me-Your-Coffee 2009-02-07 . chapter 1Aww, that was really cute! |
 Chris 2009-01-30 . chapter 1 Well, if the comics inspired this, I think I'm going to have to read them now too. Thank you. |
 LittleLlamaGirl 2008-12-29 . chapter 1I know this has been up a while but I wanted to let you know exactly how great I thought this was.
You managed to write a romantic scene between Goliath and Elisa that felt natural and you kept them very much in character. The only thing I regret about reading this fic is that it's a one-shot. I would really love to see how you would develop things further, especially now, with the depressing news about the comic...
Any thanks for taking the time to write this. I really enjoyed it. |
 Firestorm-244 2008-12-05 . chapter 1Wow this was a really great little story. I find it really hard to find good fics with Elisa and Goliath in character and you portrayed both very well. This also feels very canon-props for that. I'd like to see them exploring their relationship more and since the comics have been discontinued, I'd love to see your take on it should you feel the the need to write further about our fav Garg-human couple. Looking forward to more of you stuff- thanks. |
 Jakisback 2008-11-14 . chapter 1This story is amazing! PLEASE PLEASE get Chapter 2 out ASAP! |
 shadewatcher 2008-10-08 . chapter 1 lol very nice, i really like these guys paired up. the perfect couple as it were. |
 Spootzl 2008-09-09 . chapter 1Totally love the story and I sincerely hope you're gonna post more and soon. :) |
 margaretannem8s 2008-09-09 . chapter 1Oh how yum! Teaching Goliath how to kiss! I really liked this, I love reading Goliath/Elisa going on dates. I loved the humor and warmth. So, "one night at a time"? Does that mean we get to read more?! Man, if you write more, I'm there. |
 Kimberly T. 2008-09-08 . chapter 1Sweet! Very nicely done! |