Loved this the first time I read it and the 5th time its even better. Bravo. Hope we can get more John's kick butt Angels team sometime.

Great job...very realistic and logical -- too bad the writers couldn't have done a better job with it. We're lucky to have folks around like you to give us a very satisfied ending. Thanks!

WOw. You wrote a tag to an episode that I felt was pretty much pure dooky, as we discussed, and managed to actually make me... yeah. Eppy is still dooky. Just because you were brilliant enough to 'repair' it with this, doesn't put lipstick on that pig :P

I love the sensitive way John dealt with Vega's body. The way it almost exhausted him to the point of prostration and yet he went right back out and blew up the lab. Sigh.

and this: "Do not blame that crap on Beckett, Major... Besides, Carson has a heart too damn big for his own good some days. Thinks he can save everybody.” Aww. Love your protective John.

Great story! I really like the ending!

I didn't feel like logging on just yet lol.

Loved this story, and the serious tone to a lot of it. John's silent beating himself up thing is a lot like what he does in the show. I was shocked when Vega died, I figured she'd have been in more episodes.

I also loved the thoughts between the characters, and how they went back to blow up the remainders of the lab. Great job!

Keep up the awesome work!

Totally great story! I really enjoyed it! :D Thanks for sharing :D

Thank you so much for this. It tied up too many loose ends in this episode. No one seemed to be themselves and I'll gladly buy the hallucinogenic gas theory; too bad it wasn't expressed in the show. Shame about Capt. Vega; but it shouldn't come as a complete surprise I suppose! Always a pleasure to read one of your stories...more please??

Really liked this. The new team has great potential. :)

Wow. Not only did you make the episode 300% and plug all the plot holes with this tag, you actually made me like Teldy! Great job fixing how out of character everyone was and especially John as a military commander.

Thank you! I was also bothered by some of the same things in this episode and you handled/explained them all so well. I thought John not having a clue who some of his people were or the team assignments made him look really bad. And the Major acted very unimpressed with John, bordering on being really annoyed and disgusted with him as a CO. And they did act like oblivious teen victims of a horror movie - running around when they were supposed to stay put, people standing in front of windows yelling when the creatures find you by sound, etc. I love the way you handled all of that, plus had them go back and finish the job like they needed to. VERY NICE!!

What a great tag for a mediocre episode. You really helped to explain some of the uncharacteristic behaviours of the characters.
Thanks for posting this. Much more enjoyable and exciting than the ep.

I totally agree, THAT should´ve been in the episode (at least in parts). Like Sheppard, the military man, in action. Great observations, nicely paced storytelling.

Yep you fixed it!
Perhaps the writers were just too keen and focused on making a "SGA horror episode" that they forgot about plot and charcterization.
Just my two cents.

Rest assured I´m gonna reread this much more often than I´ll rewatch that ep.

So thank you.

Very well done, and I really liked the Major's observations on Shep. Loved it.

Thank you... you fixed it! Gah, that was an awful episode that you made right. Very nice.