Finally! A well-written Twilight fic! I was beginning to dispair that I would ever find one. This story is well-written, well thought through, endlessly humourous. I enjoyed it very much, and I`m excited for you to finish it. The immortal child being a half-vampire is an interesting twist on BD`s plot, and I can`t wait to see where it goes.

Hey Ellie,

Just wanting to check in with you. I hope you're doing well and haven't permanently abandoned this story. =)

is this story discontinued??

“Hm, so if I carried out a public expression of my love for you…”

“I’d kill you.”
- that is so cute... I always thought Edward was dying to profess his love on billboards and shout it from rooftops... I was kind of sad that Bella was the exact opposite.. not that she had to say yes to him, but she could have been more gracious about it.. she basically insulted him and his mother.. she was so INSENSITIVE about it.. dude...he's giving you a momento of his mom./. who''s been dead for nearly 100 years! it's a momento from his HUMAN life... couldn''t you be less of a brat? ::sigh:: rant over... this is why I like your Bella/... she's not as annoying or self absorbed as cnaon Bella. she is actually aware that Edward has feelings

Oh wow, cliff hanger :) very good i love it hehe, i managed to get this read through less than a day so i was very clearly hooked. :):):)

OMG that last bit made me laugh so much, Emmett is annoying lol but thatis what makes hi fun!

please update!

AH...what's going on! Very interesting story. Addictive!

I just finished what you've written so far for this story and its so good! I'm hooked on it now and you've captured the points of view of the characters so perfectly. I can't wait for the next chapter-please post it soon!

Ah! Another cliffie! :P This was definitely a great chapter and I'm so excited that they're actually in Volterra, at the castle and on the move. Can't wait for what you've got planned. ;)

Ha, gotta love Emmett. He always keeps things light and has fun no matter what. ;) Glad to see that Jacob is finally letting Bella go, but it's funny that them joining the Mile High Club is what did it, lol.

Great chapter, very well written. I'm always impressed with how you write Bella & Edward's "intimate" scenes ... very eloquent and they always flow well. Loved the Mile High Club comment, from Edward of all people. ;)

Bella's awake! And we've got some answers!! I like how everyone is banding together in hopes to save Gabriel.

Wow ... tons happened in this chapter! And again, you keep throwing me for loops! Jacob?!? :P I so wasn't expecting that, but again, you think things through so much better than I do. Of course, Jacob would be suspicious! I'm so glad Bella woke up, too, even though I wasn't expecting it quite so soon. Great chapter!

Another great chapter. I liked how you included Charlie in this one, with him calling to check on Bella. Most fanfic authors (and even SMeyers, at times) tend to forget the fact that he is, in fact, a cop and was always described as being very intuitive. The ending with Edward bathing Bella and washing her hair was so sweet but also so sad. :\