 Teresa Kaiju 2009-10-03 . chapter 7Good story with an interesting inside-out twist. I'm looking forward to more of it. |
 Baka Gaijin30 2009-06-08 . chapter 6This is easily one of the most original stories you've written in a really long time, Shane. Please continue this soon, I look forward to each new update. |
 bjetjh20 2009-03-01 . chapter 5Very interesting, looking forward to more of the story. |
 bjetjh20 2009-03-01 . chapter 4LoL |
 bjetjh20 2009-03-01 . chapter 3another great chapter. |
 bjetjh20 2009-03-01 . chapter 2I really like the Reika/Linna pair. Hope to see more of them in the future. |
 bjetjh20 2009-03-01 . chapter 1Nice chapter I like the fingers on Nene. Looks like there about to have fun with a boomer can't wait to read the rest. |
 Harry2 2009-02-16 . chapter 5Well, whoever this hacker was, it has many people interested. And that can be both good and bad. Good in the sense that many people will be looking for this hacker. Bad, in the sense that they will probably end up stepping on each others feet! |
 Harry2 2009-02-16 . chapter 4Anyone who can cause Nene this much of a headache has GOT to be someone special! And, I wonder just what is going on in this apartment! Inquiring minds want to know! |
 Teresa Kaiju 2008-12-08 . chapter 3Gettin' better and better... |
 Teresa Kaiju 2008-12-08 . chapter 2Very interesting story line. Has lot's of possibilities... |
 Analogk37 2008-12-01 . chapter 4Hehehe, nice chapter SJL. :)
Before I forget, you gotta change the spelling in your tagline from "GeMoN" to "GeNoM". XP
So if I counted right, its a 2032 Priss variant, 2032 Sylia, 2040 Linna, and a 2032 Nene? So far so good. And of course Mason is at the center of the trouble. :)
Any other chapters dedicated to other characters? Jeena? Reika? Daley? |
 Six-string Samurai 2008-10-14 . chapter 3Another interesting chapter. I'm liking Ms. Chang's role in this so far. |
 Analogk37 2008-10-13 . chapter 3Priss? With Genom?
It'll be hard to turn this more upside down than it already is. ;) |
 Harry2 2008-10-13 . chapter 3Well, its good to see that Priss, despite not likeing to sing, has fans out there. And for once, it got her OUT of getting a speeding ticket! |