seriously you write the best grimm/nel stories! this one isn't any different, the lemon just makes it that much better lol...can't wait for the next chapter.

This story was AWESOME! I love every minute and every word. It was sensual and i guess beautiful... I hope you write even more chapters. Kepp up the FANTASTIC writing! _

update soon

I know its just purely retarded of me, but I was so screaming "WE!" at the top of my lungs in my head as they rolled down the dune. Then of course I started giggling madly, causing both my husband and cats to look at me curiously. -_-

ahem...anywho...sah-weet chappy! :D lotsa nummy sex, I swear this story had contained some of your best smutty goodness! -nnodnod- And more than once I had a complete mental image, especially when Nel was trying to cover herself LOL That was just cute...poor Ichigo, he's scarred for life after seeing Grimmy nekid, but I doubt he'll want to forget seeing Nel nekid!

Kya...soo I read more than one story today :) What can I say...I'm addicted to your stories? I am your story stalker, damnit all! ;D Gotta go wake up the hubby now though. We're having date night tonight, finally watching DDR! :D :D :D

toodles! -glomps-

-WannaBeNinja's Evil Minion of Doom-

-Angil's Partner in Crime-

-The Neliel Tu's Story Stalker-

-ArjetLuna's Groupie Fangirl-

-D.F.G.'s Corrupt Cohort-

-Jazzmaster's Judgement Junkie-

-BlueDione's Idea Idolizer-

Sweet Yuya Shiina

BEST LEMON YET! :D This one was, inspiring! :D I definitely feel it was the best smut scene(s) you've done thus far, it was just excellent! I love it! I will not object to more, no ma'am.

what's strange is, I noticed some BE (British English) terms mixed in there...that's a first (I think)

owells -shrugs- more plx k thx bai

-WannaBeNinja's Evil Minion of Doom-

-Angil's Partner in Crime-

-GreenShade's Story Stalker-

-ArjetLuna's Groupie Fangirl-

-D.F.G.'s Corrupt Cohort-

-Jazzmaster's Judgement Junkie-

-BlueDione's Idea Idolizer-

Sweet Yuya Shiina