it was rushed a little but still good job!

cool... C2

Well felix, its nice to finally see this story,but I know the wait wasn't your fault. This story definitely has your style. Nice to see the elder ceremony performed in another story,and you got some nice names for your characters. The concept itself is nice,the thing between Eziekiel and his sister persephonie. It kind of reminds me of You and Ebony.(only less phsychotic) I know its a one-shot,but I couldn't help but feel that there is more to be told,like what happened in between with them or their fate afterwards...but its still a good oneshot. Good job,tell ebony hi! Mee-yaa!

Ps:my oneshot, whispers of a memory,deals with a similar concept,so check it out if

you haven't,and if you did already,sorry i brougt it up. Damn,long

review. LOL. Jonseycat,out!

Felix, dude, I don't get it, care to explain?