|Reviews for One Night in the Gym|
| Mere-Bear-Maryy 9/9/08 . chapter 1
Ha. Only Ziva could do that. Great one shot.
| MissJayne 9/9/08 . chapter 1
Loved it! Nice to see Ziva dancing, even while Tony remembers she can kill a man with her bare hands. A softer side to our assassin.
| jibbsloversunited 9/9/08 . chapter 1
For some reason I am signed in as Jibbslovers! Anyway...I love it!
Very cute, very Tony (just watching her!)...Awesome little piece!
| LorelaiGilmore82 9/9/08 . chapter 1
You just got it!
The gift to turn anything little into something special!
| xXriujooXx 9/8/08 . chapter 1
Ah, Woff (I've shortened your penname to something monosyllabic and easy for my brain to process. Deal with it.) you impress me yet again. I think this is my favorite out of all your NCIS stories so far. It struck a personal note deep down somewhere and I felt like I could relate, though I've never been in a situation like that before.
That's the power of writing for ya, I guess.
Anyway...I think this is very good and it inspired me to return to NCIS fanfiction...Wow. You totally and unintentionally just gave me an idea...
Ack...two weeks from tomorrow the new season starts where I live...it seems like an eternity...
I look forward (as always) for more glimpses into your creative mind.
| Precious Pup 9/8/08 . chapter 1
Aw that was beautiful... and the little game at the end maybe one day I will tell you... the sort of longing waiting maybe. Very fit a lot in in a short piece which I envy. Abby and Mcgee tangles on the floor. Too cute.
| aserene 9/8/08 . chapter 1
beautiful! I love it!
| eleen 9/8/08 . chapter 1
I love it! Very good. Ziva and ballet, it's a cool little secret. She can kick ass and dance circles around you! :D
| afrah11 9/8/08 . chapter 1
Wow! This one was really, really sweet. You really did great, you always do great.
I understand, we're all exceited about the premiere and next season. I hope the producers keep their promise about making Tony and Ziva closer.
Have a nice day.
Very well done.
| BatYisrael 9/8/08 . chapter 1
I can imagine Ziva as a dancer. She looks like one.
She'd actually be perfect for it. You have no IDEA (unless you've ever danced) how hard it is to control EVERY muscle in your body at once. I don't take dance any more, but I used to. I still catch myself doing the occasional arabesque using the banister. I kind of miss it, but it's too late to go back. I took a contemporary class this summer, which was pretty fun.
BACK to the actual story. I liked it a lot. I think they actually did stay PRETTY much in character.
Very cute. Tony reminds me of a guy I know-he's sweet, but only on the sly.
| Belker 9/8/08 . chapter 1
Ah, what a wonderful little piece! Tony watching Ziva and not telling, savouring the moment...(and also having the time to be DiNozzo and scaring Probie half to death, of course)
| Oxymoronic Alliteration 9/8/08 . chapter 1
That was very sweet. Well, minus Tony picking on Tim ::is very protective of the McGeek:: Everyone was well in character. I can see Ziva being a secret ballerina.
| PaperHat 9/8/08 . chapter 1
Aw, that was cute. I just love the way you write those two. You can feel the tension in every word. Excellent again!