| Reviews for One Night in the Gym |
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Mere-Bear-Maryy 9/9/08 . chapter 1Ha. Only Ziva could do that. Great one shot. Love Maryy xx |
MissJayne 9/9/08 . chapter 1Loved it! Nice to see Ziva dancing, even while Tony remembers she can kill a man with her bare hands. A softer side to our assassin. |
jibbsloversunited 9/9/08 . chapter 1For some reason I am signed in as Jibbslovers! Anyway...I love it! Very cute, very Tony (just watching her!)...Awesome little piece! V! xox |
LorelaiGilmore82 9/9/08 . chapter 1You just got it! The gift to turn anything little into something special! |
xXriujooXx 9/8/08 . chapter 1Ah, Woff (I've shortened your penname to something monosyllabic and easy for my brain to process. Deal with it.) you impress me yet again. I think this is my favorite out of all your NCIS stories so far. It struck a personal note deep down somewhere and I felt like I could relate, though I've never been in a situation like that before. That's the power of writing for ya, I guess. Anyway...I think this is very good and it inspired me to return to NCIS fanfiction...Wow. You totally and unintentionally just gave me an idea... Ack...two weeks from tomorrow the new season starts where I live...it seems like an eternity... I look forward (as always) for more glimpses into your creative mind. |
Precious Pup 9/8/08 . chapter 1Aw that was beautiful... and the little game at the end maybe one day I will tell you... the sort of longing waiting maybe. Very fit a lot in in a short piece which I envy. Abby and Mcgee tangles on the floor. Too cute. |
aserene 9/8/08 . chapter 1beautiful! I love it! |
eleen 9/8/08 . chapter 1I love it! Very good. Ziva and ballet, it's a cool little secret. She can kick ass and dance circles around you! :D |
afrah11 9/8/08 . chapter 1Wow! This one was really, really sweet. You really did great, you always do great. I understand, we're all exceited about the premiere and next season. I hope the producers keep their promise about making Tony and Ziva closer. Have a nice day. Very well done. |
BatYisrael 9/8/08 . chapter 1I can imagine Ziva as a dancer. She looks like one. She'd actually be perfect for it. You have no IDEA (unless you've ever danced) how hard it is to control EVERY muscle in your body at once. I don't take dance any more, but I used to. I still catch myself doing the occasional arabesque using the banister. I kind of miss it, but it's too late to go back. I took a contemporary class this summer, which was pretty fun. BACK to the actual story. I liked it a lot. I think they actually did stay PRETTY much in character. Very cute. Tony reminds me of a guy I know-he's sweet, but only on the sly. |
Belker 9/8/08 . chapter 1Ah, what a wonderful little piece! Tony watching Ziva and not telling, savouring the moment...(and also having the time to be DiNozzo and scaring Probie half to death, of course) Love! Belker |
Oxymoronic Alliteration 9/8/08 . chapter 1That was very sweet. Well, minus Tony picking on Tim ::is very protective of the McGeek:: Everyone was well in character. I can see Ziva being a secret ballerina. |
PaperHat 9/8/08 . chapter 1Aw, that was cute. I just love the way you write those two. You can feel the tension in every word. Excellent again! |