I love this story! Mostly because of the great suspense! I really hope you continue it if you have time! ;D

That was pretty good. I felt scared through some of it like i was watching a horror film o,O

Wow I just finished this story and it was amazing! I kept guessing until the end. If only more fan fics were this good...

Well, this is a surprisingly gruesome story for a Super Mario Bros. fanfiction. I will definitely continue reading it!

ISF

...this...is probably the biggest combination of weird and yet undeniably awesome ever made in the history of fanfiction. I am totally favoriting this because it's the strangest Mario fanfiction...well, the ONLY Mario fanfic I've ever read, but it is so oddly absorbing that I have to keep on reading. Is Peach going through some transformation to turn into a Koopa? Or a werewolf or something. I dunno, but...man, this is weird. And awesome. Did I already say that?

ISF

This is really good...Hard not to read yet so hard to continue...Please update soon can't wait to read agian please HURRY I really want to know what happends!

Lilly

Wow, that must suck.:( I was looking forward to more mystery & entrigue & conspiracy. However, job's more important I guess. Maybe when you have more time you can erase this chapter & continue the story the way you wanted it. I hope to see more BowserxPeach fluff in a rewrite. Well, anyway, see ya.

That's fine I mean at leats you didn't just end it right there and you gave us some explanation. Cool.

Mika...I'm so sad!

I know you need work and I'm proud of you for setting priorities...but I'm going to miss this story. I'm still confused. XD

I think perhaps I'll read what other people put up to solve those missing pieces...retcon your ending ;)

But I'd love to hear what YOU had in store.

braugh work is lame, huh? One day you should write up an "exactly what was going on in 'Undying' that I never got to explain" for the world to know. I'd sure read it.

Razzi

Aw, you're not going to finish ;_; I had to give up on a project too for time reasons (though in my case, it's school), so I just posted the entire plot summary - to show people what would've happened.

Anyway, you did a pretty good job at wrapping everything up (except the dehydrating water thing). However, I'd still like to get a clear description of what Peach turned into: did she just start spewing acid all over, or what?

It was a good story while it lasted, and the scene with Bowser in the fortress made for an enjoyable dénouement.

Oh, this story is so deliciously crazy right now. :q What's going on with Hecc T? WHO is he and WHAT does he want...? And why must Peach always blank out whena crucial clue is revealed?

Argh I'm afraid I'd give you a better review, Mika dear, but I'm dead tired.

thank you so much for updating...it was a joy (if not a suspenceful one!) to read. C:

-Razzi

Anyone up for a game of Hecc T. bowling? Knock over the Hecc T. pins! Why is his name Hecc T. anyways? By the way, love the Peach POV! :D

Wow, confusing; I can't wait for the next instalment. I hope when Peach finally discovers the whole story there'll be some sort of recap of everything; there's so much going on it's no wonder Peach's head hurts!

Mysteries are hard to write, but you're doing an excellent job XD

What a great story! I want Bowser to save his beloved! Is peach really in the hospital or was she experiencing flashbacks! I want to know! Wouldn't it be cool if bowser was the one to save the mushroom kingdom? Cool! Please update soon!

The plot's darkening very quickly...I LOVE IT! *sqee*

Is Bowser going to make another appearance soon, or is it going to center around Peach from now on? I can't wait for the next chapter!