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x OhYeshI'mAwesome x
2009-11-10 . chapter 8
lol funni and great lemons

reeli gud dude!

=]
R3dDymunDz
2009-11-03 . chapter 1
Great lemons i like lemon dats not like rape but its da same pushed up againsst da wall n fucked really good lemons. U should write more of dat
LilyVampire
2009-08-13 . chapter 7
wow this is so good, i even made my bf read it xD he said he liked it too :D
so anyway, i hope you'll updates soon so we cant see how it ends :D
NightShadowDweller14
2009-07-16 . chapter 4
shitt .. arguing over if she cummed or not...

lmfao good job intresting storyy ! XD
a thousand cranes
2009-06-09 . chapter 8
This was god. ^^ haha.
Sasukeliker1
2009-04-25 . chapter 3
0_0. wow. Nice. ;)
Sasukeliker1
2009-04-25 . chapter 2
I quote "Unbe-fucking-lieveable" :)
Sasukeliker1
2009-04-25 . chapter 1
This is all so confusing...but funny! :)
Kirihara Sakuno
2009-04-18 . chapter 1
I was a little hesitant to read this at first, because the summary you've provided was a little... off-putting. No offense meant. However, this is one of the few stories where the summary was bad (again, no offense meant), but the story was incredible. It was quite a pleasure to read, and I hope you make more stories like this.
FallenMary
2009-04-10 . chapter 8
Hi girl!
Long time no talking.
But really, i'm in love with your writhing!I normally don't like sakura and sasuke stories, but girl, you're a genius!
Well, congrats by on of your most devoted fan!
Evalena
2009-02-16 . chapter 8
I swear...this has got to be THE hottest story I have EVER READ.

O.o
Melitza
2009-02-09 . chapter 8
I'll admit, I've run across the story synopsis in the archive and in peoples favorite lists for a long time - but the description made it sound like the story itself would be one of those boring, chat-room style, terribly written pieces. Finally, after I had seen it appear in quite a few of my favorite authors favorite lists, I broke down and read.

Imagine my pleasant surprise! Well written smut. Very hawt, most excellent, and good writing. My main critique would be to change up the description to something less chat-roomy, because like I said, it would have been easy for me to keep overlooking this one for just that reason.
hinataloveXD
2009-01-18 . chapter 1
I so loved this story and i dont even like sasusaku this is a shame lol you are so great at this high five
Ryuuri
2009-01-14 . chapter 8
Maybe you could write a NarutoxHinata fic. Unless you have something against the pairing...
Rida and Ria
2009-01-01 . chapter 8
i love it this was my first sasusaku story and love it ! ive also read your other stories they were the best ever ! I LOVE YOU!
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