I loved this story. It was saddening whenever they got more hurt but also exciting at the same time. I was brimming with moe! :3

To tell you the truth, I liked both endings (since the first one seemed more realistic) but in romantic stories like this, you cant go wrong on a happy ending. ^_^

Thanks to both of you for making this great fan fic!

Gosh... That was painful. A Haruhi remake of Saw? I would never have thought of it. 'Twas absolutely amazing, bloody scary, and kinky all at the same time. Everything a good fanfiction should be.

I much prefer the alternate ending, since I can't possibly imagine a world without Itsuki. He's far too special and wonderful.

As for Kyon's last name, you never find out. Kyon isn't even his real name! It's a nickname his Aunt made for him, and has since stuck. I wish I knew his real name. *sigh*

Keep up the good work!

Dude that story was awsome and um kyon doesnt have a last name because kyon isnt his real name his real name is unkown, but hey thats an awsome story a pleasure to read im a guy and i had no idea about this anime my name is itsuki ming my grandparents are from china i love anime and looked up charecters so itsuki koizumi is my fav charecter, even has the same hair...anyway amazing story make another please

Behind his eye was my next guess;;
Bahh! I can't believe you killed him! (thank god for the alternate ending)

I don't really know what else to say, D:
Brilliant story, I was anticipating every moment.

Oh, and not much is known about Kyon's real name 'Kyon' is just a nick name by his aunt that his sister spread around~

Ahh! I'm so nervous, I've seen the Saw movies and they never end up with a happy ending! Gahh, Kyon the key's in your throat I know it! That's what the knife's for isn't it?!

Poor Itsuki, and you wonder why he's getting hit harder (well getting seizures and dying faster) with the virus(?)! He jumped into a giant pool of needles, injecting himself with god knows what! Atleast with Kyon you know you how or what your going to react by it. (I'm not saying it's any easier for him but in my opinion the unknown is much more horrifying)

Still I am facinated by the story so far I can't wait untill I finish reading!

WAH! HOW COULD U! U KILLED ITSUKI!

but overall awesome story

maybe the key is in one of there body's? like, when they were sleeping it was inserted. And the scalpel is to dig~

AAH! I read this whole fan fic today and It was AMAZING!XD Though I also thought that it had the potential to go under the "Horror" catagory. -just my opinion. It was so well written and the end almost had me in tears...then I saw the forward button and the chapter named "Alternant Ending" And I was able to brethe a sigh of relief.
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Ant the question you posed at the end of the last chapter...I have absolotely NO IDEA what Kyon's last name is...Id never really thought about it till now...
All in all, awsome fic. Hope to read more from you!
~Hikaru

Wasn't most of this from Saw II? Great story.

Heya, I'm a friend of Mia and Sofa (just a heads up so it's not like you're talking to a TOTAL stranger), and I absolutely loved the story. All of the ItsuKyon moments just made me melt, you have no idea how much I love that pairing (at this current time I have 234 various fanarts and screenshots of them saved on my computer). Oh, and by the way, to answer your question, Kyon doesn't have a last name, or rather, it's never given at any point in the series. In fact, Kyon isn't even his real first name (that's never given either), it's just a nickname.

Thank you for doing the alternate ending. I liked it better than having them die. I think you did an excellent job of writing in a genre you are not usually concerned with. I am glad it is done though, as it was really creepy!

*bawls* THAT WAS SO SAD. ;-; ...and I loved it. :D

Good story-looking forward to the alternate ending, but who did this to itsuki and the other guy. Somebody must have really hated them, but you never said who set this all up and trapped them and it leaves an unfinished feeling to the story. Maybe you could explain that in the alternate ending.

The scalpel is for buttsex. The key is located amidst the buttsex. ...hm. That sounded funnier when it DIDN'T make any sense. Now it just sounds...weird. *shrug* Anyway. This is fabulous. |D Abuse/torture/angst/boylove FOR THE WIN. ^_^

~+Takanari-tama+~

This story just gets grimmer and grimmer. These two guys are on their last legs, and even if they find the antidote, it probably is too late for at least one of them.

I think the scalpel is to cut open one of the guy's vein-what for I have no idea. As to where the key is located, it has something to do with the scalpel, but I am not sure why or where.

One thing I think you should consider-instead of always refering to the men as males, you should just call them by name, or use guys or fellows. Using males makes it sound like an anthropology discription.