please write more your story is fantastic i would be die if you stop

I LOVE IT
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its so captivating and interesting
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plz you've just got to write more
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PLEASE
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its well written, few grammatical mistakes, and actually has a story plot...oh and best of all its original
YAY
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its what I've been waiting for

Wow! What a great story! It is fresh and so well written. I like it very much! I just hope that you are planning in continuing writting it. It is too good to be left unfinished. Please do keep writing.

Sincerely

Moonmoore

omg update soon

This was, by far, one of the most intricate settings that I have seen on this site. Not only was it complex, but it actually made sense when everything (so far) was put together. I also really appreciate the long chapters! This has the potential to be a truly epic fanfic. Good job!

Sasunaru, Sasunaru, sasunaru,sausnaru! Yay a well written story, with yaoi!

*gives you a cookie* There. There... This was good. I can't wait for the next chapter!!

I VOULENTEER TO BETA!! X3 the boys were kinda maen to you. *gives you a cookie and a mufin* there you go!

I would like to take the chance to tank you. This has to be the best story I have read in several months, on this sight. It has much promiose and an indeffenitly beautiful plot. I enjoyed reading both chapters, of this story, greatly. I do hope you update soon; and I fully intend to never forgive you if you do not compleat this story(LOL). No, I'm being quite serious. I was quite lucky to run accrost this little gem. I hope you pallish it until it shines with a blinding light. It already shines very well, but I expect it to only develop more as it continues. It is surprising, to me, that this is your first story. It really is quite good and I truly did enjoy it. I look forward to seeing more from you in the futcher. Happy holadays.


Shinkakyou -.-

I really want to read more! Please update son!

Hmm, kay then. It was very good and a little confusing [but still good! Sorta deliberate confusing feel at times so yeah, it's all good!]. Umm, yeah, there are a few mistakes in it which happens a lot, especially if it's long. It would be good to get someone to beta it, just so they can read through this a couple of times and tell you where the mistakes are. A bit of confusion in the bold/italic sections, where it sometimes feels like too much has been emphasised. It's a very good plot and it keeps the reader interested; I can't wait for more! Thanks a lot for the story, and I hope this helps a bit. *

It's...well, it's very good, the plot and all, but it's terribly confusing. There are a lot of confusing places in terms of whose point of view it is, or what the tense is, but when you finish the chapter it kinda unscrambles and gets together to form something that makes sense. And yeah, when you figure it out it's really great. But it's confusing in the most part. Hope that helps [somewhat]. Thanks for the story! *

amazing! this looks really interesting so far.
can't wait to read more! update soon please. :)

loved it :D i cant believe it thats such an incredible story :O

did you made up all the mei and gei thing?? EVEN THE KINGDOMS?? i was in awe while reading

the way you write, i really feel like im looking it :O

omg please update soon :D

lol you forgot to mention possible mpreg!!^^TCHYEA!

UPDATE SOON!!^^