Aw! That was so cute! I love Edward's POV! Would you consider a follow-up piece? Pretty please?

Holey vampire venom, woman!

So I jump on to check out Planet's Heart (because I'm studying geology and I swear there's a rock name that is really close if not exactly the same as the villain from that piece) and I find that YOU. ARE. WRITING. FANFICS. AGAIN. And not only that ...

TWILIGHT FANFICS! *dies*

I took you off author alert because I thought you were done! You didn't tell me you were writing fanfic again or I would have reviewed these AGES AGO!

Anyways, this was a real treat. I'd always wondered possibly could be going through that gorgeous vamp's head in the plaza scene in Volterra; this seems so fitting! I love love LOVE it! Okay, I'm off to read your other Twilight fanfic now ... *huggle glomp*

~~*HelluoLibrorum

this was your first twi-fic?! WTF! This was amazing! you really got into edwards head and stayed true to his character all the way through!
my only constructive critisism is...draw it out longer. edward thinks so much. lol but it was still utterly awesome!

Very nicely done Gemma! Whoot!

Nice. Very, very nice.

This was amazing! Great job! :)

Very good!

i liked it.. it was nice to hear what edward was thinking
hope you continue writing :)

amazing, i loved it! just what i've been looking for!

Absolutely wonderful! Great POV of Edward. I think Stephanie would like it to. :0)