A great story. Very good.

All the people who passed this over because of a "bad summery" (which it wasn't, by the way) totally missed out. You've written a gem amongst the Narnia fanfiction section. I can't even go into detail about what I liked and how much, because it's simply fantastic! Great work! I'm going to go stalk your other fics now.

Wow! I have to say, being completely honest, the summary wasn't very good at all, and I almost passed by. But I'm a bit of a Star Wars buff as well as a Narnia fan, and I couldn't quite pass by the idea of Jedi ideals meshing with Narnia. So I read your fic.

I'm quite glad I did. This one-shot was a bit abstract-ish, but very, very interesting. You have a very intriguing style going on in this and I quite enjoyed it. You got an excellent insight into Peter, which I've been wanting to/trying to do lately.

Very cool fic overall! I would only suggest fixing up your summary a bit, to get more people looking into your story. The summary just doesn't quite make sense. But this is such an interestingly well-done fic, more people should read it. :)

~Red

No offense but the summery sounded really bad. I only began to read the story because no one had reviewed yet. But actually the story turned out quite good. Though you might want to edit it so that either Peter is gay (which I absolutely abhor) or, make it more clear that Caspian is female as your summery stated. Also, a bit more of the jedi part would be good. Peter as a jedi would be most interesting.
All in all good story.
Jackie