Classic, and so, so true. Pure gold!

Ah, very good, totally not what I was expecting but the ending made me laugh outloud, I can count fics on my hands alone that have managed to do that.

Good work.

awsome I LOLed. crack fic is cracked

Ah Man LMAO!

ROTFLMAO!

Yeah, it's pretty hard to do anything lasting to Jayne, he recovers a mite quick. Hehehe.

Hurt you, never, this was awesome. Of course I predicted the last line about halfway through, but thats only because it is so absolutely positively neccessarilly appropriate to the situation. You do a great job of writing both Jayne and the Verse. I hope you write more in the genre, if not to continue this little bit of fluffy amusement something else at least.

cackles

Pretty funny Wise... now more Why Sailor Pluto hates the bet please.

You should post this to tth they would totally love it there, ALSO you had me laughing till i fell off my chair.

Haha, very interesting and funy :P
I wish you would continue this.

ROFLMAO. Funny and well deserved. Loved the last line. It's just what Jayne would say.

Perfect slice of evil .Very very funny thanks