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alixa19
2009-11-28 . chapter 2
more please!!

i read this a short while ago... but i had to come back. i wanna know how it all ends!

really well written. i love the ending of this chapter!
wickedhpnerd
2009-10-12 . chapter 2
Awesome fanfic! PLEASE UPDATE! There is so much about this that is just sheer brilliance! Juushiro/Ichigo <3 I really liked Ukitake's take on everything, he's so sweet. Also the first chapter was hot, poor Byakuya, at one point I thought Renji was mpregged to and that he'd be the one that Byakuya was meeting (I dunno, my comprehension was terrible there), however I really liked how Byakuya and Ukitake's realtionship grew. Also LMAO at Byakuya thinking it may have been Izuru or Yumichika that was mpregged as well. Oh and what does Ichigo and Ukitake's son look like besides being sickly and thin? Does he have white hair, orange hair, or peach hair?
And LMAO at Byakuya putting Renji in prison, poor Renji!
Anyways, please update!
nequam-tenshi
2009-07-13 . chapter 2
Byakuya is being an idiot! Don't push the father away! Renji is like Ichigo but less rash-he should understand yet Byakuya thinks he can't!

update soon!
nashi-hime
2009-06-15 . chapter 2
I'm really enjoying this story. You've done a good job of describing the emotions of the characters so far. I'm eager for the next chapter (if there is one, that is.)
DreamlessRiver
2009-05-14 . chapter 2
Ah ha ha! Poor Renji. Imprisoned over pudding. Classic.
Update soon, this is too cute!
kurisuchin45556
2009-03-02 . chapter 2
haha, Byakuya's mood swings are worse than I could have imagined.
I'm glad you had Ichigo take responsibility. I didn't picture him with Ukitake, but, it works. Nice job!!
Frenchie-chan
2009-02-10 . chapter 2
I love this fic so so very much! I've re-read it several times; I just can't get enough! Byakuya seems very in-character as do Ukitake and Renji and Ichigo. I ADORE how, even though Byakuya is carrying the child, he insists Renji is the mother. And I feel so bad for Ukitake... taking all those nasty criticisms and still smiling. My God, I want to hug that man so badly.

I absolutely died at the thought of a pregnant Kenpachi. Oh, the hilarity! XD

My favorite line: "...but for now, he savored the fact that his mood swings put people in solitary confinement."

I offically love you now. 8D

Excellent job, dearie!

-Frenchie (AKA cheesecake-alchemist)
tellie
2009-02-09 . chapter 2
I hate mpreg (it is just SO illogigal!), but I love how you write Byakuya and Renji. Ukitake, too, but especially Byakuya and Renji. They are... well, not really in character, but more in character than I touht it would be possibile for mpreg fic. And how you wrote their relationship and sex! Holy...! Wow! That was about crystalliced style!
xrosiex
2009-02-09 . chapter 2
I don't usually like Mpreg but I absolutly LOVE pregnant Byakuya ^^ ...and the pudding thing was funny..

...poor Ukitake btw and I did not expect Ichigo to be the father of his child at all...that shocked the hell out of me...
NarutoVixin
2009-02-05 . chapter 2
i will be waiting happyly for more of this tale
yaoilover6969
2008-12-23 . chapter 2
oh please write more of this story it was realy good and i love it when byakuya is prgnant i love tose kind of stories wwell keep it up you did awesome.
vendetta-rin
2008-12-13 . chapter 2
what renji got put in jail over pudding! r stupid stuff heehee ichigo has a kid
Seiri-sama
2008-12-10 . chapter 2
Oh my FREAKING GOD! Byakuya sent Renji to prison over pudding! PUDDING! ROTFL! When I started to read this part I thought that maybe Renji had done something like be overly friendly with someone or something like that. It was pudding. I had to re-read that twice to make sure my eyes weren't playing tricks on me. LOL!!

I had kinda figured Ichigo was Ukitake's baby-daddy since he kept going on about how young he was and Ichigo is the youngest one of all. I also was sure that Ichigo would be pissed about Ukitake not thinking he wanted to be a part of his child's life. Ichigo is very much a family man/boy/teen so it was a given that he'd want to be with his son but Ukitake couldn't have known that. I do kinda wonder what Isshin is going to do or say about it (it would make a wonderful spin off from this story, the semi-married life of Ichi/Jyuu).

Update soon please!!

Ganbatte!!

Seiri
When love and death embrace
2008-12-10 . chapter 2
I totaly love your mpreg storys and was thrilled that another chapter was upp^^ And I love a preg ukitake. I was kind of hoping that shu was the father, but I love that Ichigo is the father. I can't wait for another chapter from you:P
Ruby Fire Dragon
2008-12-09 . chapter 2
Poor Bya-boo. I think the mood swings are starting to get to him.
lolz I think Byakuya makes a better pregnant man than Renji, mainly because he's more feminine looking.
OMG imagine a pregnant Kenpachi?! *shot* x_X
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