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JADETH!!!
2009-11-02 . chapter 34
I THOUGHT IT WAS EXCELLENT AND MAJORLY HILARIOUSO! SO STOP PUTTING YOURSELF DOWN *slaps you*

*hugs you* Sorry.

I thought it was incredibly awesome!
UPDATE MOAR!
HangoverBunny
2009-10-31 . chapter 34
i'm gonna keep on harassing you, emma...you're not saying goodbay, right?

ok...i am here to review not to be annoying :D
Veet Hair Removal?! XD OMFG, I can clearly imagine Tyson using it...
and it wouldn't hurt Lee if he used it every morning...

his problems are serious...really serious :P

anyways...I absolutely love 'Chronicles...' and I want you to continue writing! I demand you to!

i'm off to make party ring glasses now XP... bai bai
ramndomsaku
2009-10-31 . chapter 8
OMG!
I have always wanted to review for this story but because i saved on my phone so i could read on the go i couldnt review so im HAPY

aw
Bam sounds evil...and cute at the same time

PLEASE KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!
Effeminate Tuesday AKA MarianQ
2009-10-30 . chapter 34
YOU LIE


And you make me want party ring glasses...I think I shall go on the hunt for some party rings...and pipe cleaners...


You know how I eat party rings? I lick off all the colourdy shit and then throw away the acshooal base, acos it is nassty. Anyway, I demand you stop bashing this story or I shall have you sue your own ass for libel, whatever that is. GOOD DAY TO YOU SIR! Harumph!
Silv3r Ang3l
2009-10-30 . chapter 31
O HAI.

'sparkly, pink vibrator'
Teehee.

'(HOLY FUCKING COW, A NORMAL BREAKFAST FOR ONCE!)'
HOLY FUCKING PINK COW OF DOM!

'Bryan is trying to look up her dress.'
Oh. How lovely.

UNIFORMS?

'Which is a shame, as she has fantastic legs.'
she does!her and Julia must have perfect model bodies.
AT least they do in my mind.

'He saluted '
SALUTATIONS!

'“Buzz, buzz,” Kai, err, buzzed,'
rofl.rofl.lol.

'“Does anyone have any lipgloss?” Spencer asked.'
Excuse me,isn't that normal? =P


'“And God said, ‘LET THERE BE MICHAEL MCINTYRE’!” the teacher shouted.

“Err, Miss?” Tala called. “What’s this got to do with Photosynthesis?”

“Absolutely nothing,” she replied.'
DO YOU HAPPEN TO BE THE TEACHER,MY LIEGE?

'“No. Just hand me a lot of money, and we’ll be quits,”'
LOL,LOL,LOL,LOL.

I feel for Mariam.I do.I truly do.

Lawl.
glitteredvixen06
2009-10-30 . chapter 34
Despite what you say, this fic isn't a piece of 'shit'. It's one of the best humour fics I've come across. Please don't stop writing it... but hey, it's not my choice.

Still an excellent chapter, the humour is still there :)

Later,
GV06
StZen
2009-10-30 . chapter 34
I SWEAR I reviewed the last two chapters!! Where's my reviews?! =S
Well, I loved those chapters nonetheless, though it's been about 2 months or something haha.
I read this in serious need of cheering up...and to a large extent it worked! =D M I want Party Rings, they're so good!
...I also want chips, but I always want chips!
I use Veet on my eyebrows! LOL it warns to use it nowhere near the eyes but it's never done anything disasterous for me haha XD
Another wonderful chapter of a fab story...which I am still reading! And therefore must continue!! =D
FluorescentBlackNightmare
2009-10-29 . chapter 34
:O Sorry it's taken me so long to review!!

And don't stop now! Please!! :'(

So-o-o-o-o-o, please update soon! xD
sasukechica
2009-10-28 . chapter 34
damn it tyson aren't you sure its not just gas?!

anyway its been a while but definitely worth the wait

til next time
Rapunzelle
2009-10-28 . chapter 34
Loved this chapter. Maybe if your getting bored of it, maybe you should end it. Please let tyson have the baby. Please update soon
:)
pinkjasmin90
2009-10-28 . chapter 34
Let me ask you something Furious Fanny;

Let me ask you just one thing;

ARE YOU MAD!?!?

This story has gotten like...a TRILLION reviews and you're questioning it!?

Does PJ90 have to come to your house and knock some sense into you? DOES SHE!?!

She shall...just give her your address and she shall

...I dont know why I am refering to myself in the third person...hehe It makes me feel like Jesus! :P

ANYWAY!

This is possibly the best thing in the world...ever and if you dare delete it or badmouth it again I shall...do something...BAD!

I won't but a false threat is just as good as a...non-false one LOL

Moving swiftly on...I thought this chapter was perfecto...for i dearly miss party rings :'(

I'm also very glad Tyson has gone into labour...at least I'm assuming he has, maybe he just ate too many party rings

But you know who i feel bad for in this story? (this info is obviously very important to you so I shall tell yee) BORIS!!

It's all very well that everybody else is off having fun and getting knocked up but what is that poor man to do when all the young boys are off without him!?!
Somehow I can't imagine him attending coffee mornings with Grandpa Granger and Voltaire...I feel deeply sad for that man...for I love him :(

I shall stop writing bollocks now and depart!
Silent Pandemonium
2009-10-27 . chapter 34
What? No updating this anymore? That would be a shame, and I really mean that. It's like, the first and only crackfic I've ever liked not to mention it would be downright cruel to let all your readers hanging right now when Tyson's contractions have started. And the next time you think this is a piece of shit look at those 400 reviews you've got, I think a lot of writers on this site would kill to login and see that reviewnumber at their story stats. As for being bored with it, well, I can't say a lot to change that but I really hope you'll manage to overcome it because as I said before, it would be a downright shame to not finish after 2 months of work and 34 uploaded chapters.

Good luck and I really hope there will be another update (insert Max's puppy dog eyes here)
~*~
Silent Pandemonium
Vulecrise
2009-10-27 . chapter 34
This is not a pile of shit!

I really, really enjoyed it XD

Damn Tyson, eating Kai's party ring glasses...gr...

LOL Tala was stalking them XD

O_o Tyson's contractions have started? Oh dear =|

YAY for update! You have SPAMWORTH APPROVAL XD

(And now I should really go update one of my own fics...)
MissCloud
2009-09-11 . chapter 33
XD! Yay Lee!! It always makes me happy when there's lots of funny Lee x3 yayez!

I laughed so much at the fact that Spencer had the hoover under the table XD rofl!!

LOVED it, update soon!
EffeminateTuesday
2009-09-03 . chapter 33
I WILL REVIEW NOW! I know, I know, I'm the worst husband ever...I even forgot the milk on my way home from work. BUT I'LL MAKE IT UP TO YOU I SWEAR! Please don't leave me! I...I can't live without you and your deeds to our house! D=


Ahem, yes, to quote you, this chapter is VAIR funny.


To quote me "BAHAHHAAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHAH*heart attack*"



That is all.
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