Interesting story so far. I'm glad that Chance has a new arm and has something to hide it with when not in Swat mode.

I was looking forward to finding out what all had happened in the 5 months or so that T-bone was out of it though. Maybe that will happen in a future chapter?

I was a bit surprised by them changing their colors and jet design though, and that Feral put them in charge. I do look forward to finding out what happenes next.

this is greeat i hope there more & soon plzz more no rush i love it keep it up ;)

How could you do such a thing to poor T-bone? He is my favorite and you did that to him.(Sniff,sob.) Anyway it was good,but I agree with Uly it needed a beta.I also saw where you spelled the Thundertruck,the Turbotruck.

wow! intense, very good story line. can't wait for the next chapter.

Very, very good story. Exciting and I can't wait for more. You do need some beta work on this for grammar reasons only. I'll help if you want me to. I really love what you've come up with. We need new ideas here and this is certainly a new concept. Don't let it languish, keep pushing the chapters out while the iron and muses are hot.