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1 week later and I'm finally done :) great story I adored it

I loved the story! Nathan is so sweet. Amazing guy!

What a beatiful story!

I really loved it

Aw, I absolutely adore your story! I've been reading every free second in the last three days and I couldn't make myself doing anything else besides working and sleeping until I finished it! So addictive! :D Gonna read all your other stories now, because I really love the way you're writing Naley love! :)

This is my favorite Naley story out of all the ones I have read. Just because of the way you wrote Nathan and despite his Dad's wealth and the death of his mother, he is still so caring and sweet. Naley are perfect but shame it took Haley so long to see what Nathan really meant to her.

Nice beginning! Enjoying it so far although I thought the whole Naley moment was a bit early in the story haha - yeah, they are a bit AU in this story :). Keep up the good work though!

i have read almost all of your fanfictions. but i've been reading them from my phone and it would never let me review until now so i thought i would tell you all your work is awesome. i really love all of your stories.

Such a gorgeous story :D

Would've liked it if Naley got together earlier though! lol

Well done :D:D

i love this story it was so so so good!

Hey I just wanted to say that I just finished reading this story and I loved it! There were times where I found myself thinking will naley ever get together? but it was so worth the wait! Nathan and Haley's love was so perfect in this story! Great job.

Hello there!

Just started reading your story and I really enjoy it.

So before I forget anything here's my review for the first 4 chapters:

first of all one mistake: "He watched as her laughter died down as they both just gazed at each other.

Lucas’s thoughts were running wild in his head. Their in love. Haley and Jake have always been together.

He didn’t want to come between them. Haley was special, she was different. "

shouldn't it be "nathan's thoughts"? well it did confuse.

as for the story: I really enjoy it. I especially loved the scene where Nathan came in topless. I really like how you keep the story light with banter on one hand but you've got this deeper and more serious story line behind it(although I am not quite sure what happened with Deb? probably killed herself or something?).

I can't really picture Nathan playing piano but I guess it takes a bit of time to adjust to this "new" nathan. He is very different to the one we all know from telly.

I haven't read any fanfiction in ages, just wanted to read a bit to get inspired again to write and I guess your story will give me that - so thank you.

Although I probably won't write before I finished reading yours, cause I really want to know what else you'll come up with.

Oh and I really liked that kiss after she sung. That was so sweet, I thought the beginning a bit over the top with how amazed he was by her but then again it is really cute.

Oh my, that was a pretty poor review just now, my structure is awful. Well, I hope you don't mind. I am sure I'll review again soon; when i've read the next part...

Amazing Story! I loved how she seemed torn between two loves but it was really Nathan that she loved the entire time!

heyyxx

great chapter lots of stuff happened. This Nathan is very shy and nervous hopefully its just in this chapter cuz i like nathans cocky side much much more! Hating Jacob!GR: .

Keep up the good work.

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I'm so in love with this story and so sad that it has ended, but I think you ended it perfectly.. good job! :0) Oh, and a few chapters ago you said that Jamie is supposed to be like 8... I thought he was 5?..lol