lol love nap time

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Is this the end? Because I love your insight in Hodgins mind concerning Zack and Angela - it really is a wonder he didn't join Zack in the Looney Bin.

"Because Zach is NOT a bad plotline!"

Ironic, huh? That's exactly what he has become. Damn Hart Hanson. Double damn for breaking Hodgela up. Triple damn for making BB's love and caring evolve into simple lust. And a fourth damn for making the show slowly die.

I am soo hooked. I think it's a shame the way the series handled the Hodgins/Angela split and it's good to see someone giving Jack the attention he deserves! Please continue, even if you do give up on the show (I hope not) *don't* let this wither ad die. Especially on a cliff hanger like that!

Very interesting, and a great look into Hodgins' head once again :D Great job!

And you just stopped it there? NO I want to know what it is that he has to do! And i want to know what is going on with Jack! You can't just stop it there!

like it

great chapter...i kept imagining his mentor as being Gordon Gordon, but I am not sure if that was who it was supposed to me...hehe I miss Gordon Gordon

This Deleted Scene raises arresting ideas for further plot elaboration. However, for a gross amateur (this reader), the psychological tennis feels a little too extensive.

As usual, this author's ability to create natural dialogue, pull out important details and play purposefully with language make this scene a pleasure to read.

I don't know why you struggled with this so - it's a very good vignette.

You might not like writing dialogue-only chapters but, nevertheless, it was still well done.

This is a great story and it really makes me feel for Hodgins. Poor guy.

I really like this. Like, really. Hodgins has some serious dark-and-twisty closeted stuff, and I bet Sweets can read that like an open book. I would love to see something like this on the show - we don't get to see nearly enough of the periphery characters like Hodgins, Angela, and Cam. Nice work!

lol. A very interesting story. I like Sweets. He's slowly but surely growing on me, and Hodgins's interactions with him (to the point of even becoming *comfortable* with the idea of therapy) reeked of awesome. I also loved the last chapter. Poor Zack just keeps throwing everyone for a loop, and he doesn't even mean to... or does he? :-P

I feel like the only person in the world who thinks this, but I honestly think that Evil!Zack could have been a good storyline, plenty of drama and angst and mystery... if only they'd put some forethought and development into it outside of the single episode where it just sort of... happened. Oh well. Not much we can do about it now.

Anyway, this is neither the time nor the place for a rant. I have always had a soft spot for tertiary characters, and you've nailed Sweets and Hodgins, IMHO, so thanks for this. :-D

Not only have you brought my two favorite Bones characters together, you nailed their personalities perfectly, and made them react to everything just as they would on the show. (Hell, you even predicted a little...) I don't know if you're going to end up making this Hodgins/Sweets (as in slash), but I seriously think the show should just turn Lancey and Jacky into a couple and be done with it. And maybe make another show based upon that. Or at least just feature Hodgins more without all the Angela drama...

But anyway. (I'll stop rambling now.) Great job thus far; any updates you have will be expected with great anticipation and read with great enthusiasm.