*tear* That was sad... *sob* I love Suboshi ...he's one of my faves... poor Suboshi.. I like reading death-fics..I don't know why ..I just do..I'll read any others you have..._

Later Hotaru Sasaki

sad...*sniff* well written

*wails into kasa* OOOOOOH! Poor, poor Suboshi! That was so saad noda! WHY IS YU WATASE KILLING ALMOST ALL OF THE COOL PEOPLE NODA? ... baka...

::giggles:: WAI! This is fuuuuuuuuuun a little spastic... but spast-ism is good. Suboshi is good too... want some happy-glitter? Its great when you're depressed!

Very well written! It's good, because you can actually imagine this going through his head when he died, and it helps you connect to the character better. Please keep writing!

-Chiriko-chan