That was really good, sad but good. Keep up the great work and I hope you write another gundam wing story in the future.

hey, um, people? If you highlight the screen, it highlights the words too.

That said, well written! Nice!

From,

aspiring author

/aspiringauthor

Amande: I"VE GONE BLINDE! *runs around screaming.

Hirair: Think Fast! *throws a fring pan at Amande's head* The screen is black but the sides are still white. I dare to ask what happened there.

Amande: *ducks from fring pan* Yes! I can see. You can't see a damn thing on your fic.

Hirari: Amande, let me tell you about a stupid little saying.

Amande: What?

Hirari: Don't ask, don't tell.

I hate ta say this, but I can't read it. I bet it's good though! honest!

Kit

Not Kitten,

Not Kitty-Kat,

Kit

Ummmmm...yeah...i don't know if you know this but no one can see anything! :P