you portrayed mai so perfectly
here and that is hard to do because she's such a quiet and mysterious person in the show excellent work i can't wait to see what else you can do

^_^ ^~^ The consensus is that this is a wonderful fic. Short, sweet and to the point...just like Mai! lol Anyway, marvelous work.

This is such a great story! I think you captured Mai perfectly here. Very, very good!

Okay, a lot of people write Mai really out of character when it comes to the whole Zutara pairing. They make her unnecessarily mopey, or emo, or something that makes me want to crawl up a wall. But this story seems to have the whole Maiko situation captured impecably. You have Mai down pat, and she's a really difficult character to portray. That's probably because you're right, though--no one really knows Mai. This was a great fic.

I really liked your portrayal of Mai...it was very close (and in-depth) to her actual character in the show, something that you rarely see in fanfiction's these days. You should consider writing more about her, since you did an excellent job. Kudos, and keep up the good work.

Oi, a knife through my heart-- this was so well written! You make me love Mai more than ever (and I love her so!!)...

Great work :o)

OMG, I didn't know you wrote for the Avatar fandom! I'm a Mai fan too, though my most favorite character is Toph. Loved the fic, and keep up the good work!

I could read that over, and over again, and never get bored. Perfection. :)

Great job.