 The Silent Dreaming 2009-06-14 . chapter 4I believe I'm forming a habit with my comments. This time, I'm not going to criticize how you write because I don't like repeating myself. I am, however, going to share a tidbit of information that I have with you.
I have an alien vs. predator book that has information about aliens left without a queen. Apparently, when left alone too long, they begin to colonize. One of the drones changes gender and becomes a queen.
We probably get our information from different sources, so there might be just a little confusion. |
 DragonHydra 2009-05-13 . chapter 3I like it,good job on it.
but I found thes
"Warrior’s tail comes down in an arc-aimed to pierce your chest- you raise your own tail and >**<>swum< before
swam |
 X. Historian 2008-10-27 . chapter 4 I do believe that the style of writing in this story treads very lightly over the line in one of the Guidelines for writing, but I can't say for sure...
Other than that, very good! It's an interesting take on Xenomorphs born out in the wild without a hive, but I'm wondering about if any of yours went crazy, Ali.
I'll go and read the other story that seems to b after this one. |
 Max 2008-09-23 . chapter 4 Different. Very different. but good. very good. |
 peya luna 2008-09-22 . chapter 4 interesting idea! |
 Me 2008-09-20 . chapter 4 Wow, this is really well written. I love it! |
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