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The Silent Dreaming
2009-06-14 . chapter 4
I believe I'm forming a habit with my comments. This time, I'm not going to criticize how you write because I don't like repeating myself. I am, however, going to share a tidbit of information that I have with you.

I have an alien vs. predator book that has information about aliens left without a queen. Apparently, when left alone too long, they begin to colonize. One of the drones changes gender and becomes a queen.

We probably get our information from different sources, so there might be just a little confusion.
DragonHydra
2009-05-13 . chapter 3
I like it,good job on it.
but I found thes

"Warrior’s tail comes down in an arc-aimed to pierce your chest- you raise your own tail and >**<>swum< before
swam
X. Historian
2008-10-27 . chapter 4
I do believe that the style of writing in this story treads very lightly over the line in one of the Guidelines for writing, but I can't say for sure...

Other than that, very good! It's an interesting take on Xenomorphs born out in the wild without a hive, but I'm wondering about if any of yours went crazy, Ali.

I'll go and read the other story that seems to b after this one.
Max
2008-09-23 . chapter 4
Different. Very different. but good. very good.
peya luna
2008-09-22 . chapter 4
interesting idea!
Me
2008-09-20 . chapter 4
Wow, this is really well written. I love it!
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