 Snow'sLuckyCat 2008-10-17 . chapter 3bravo, dudette! bravo! ;) a stellar, sweet ending to a stellar, heartfelt fic! :) two thumbs way up from me! :)
~your pal,
Sharma |
 LittleMeanPeppershaker 2008-10-16 . chapter 3Why did you have to scare me so much, telling me he was gonna die? Huh? Jeez! You know I'm gullible! I'll believe anything!
Thank goodness you didn't feel the need to follow through with your evil lies and kill off one of the best Marvel superheroes ever created. 'cause then I would have cried. Alot. And I cry easily, but this would have had me bawling like a baby that just found out that its favorite Teddy Bear got its head torn off. (weird thing to compare myself to, I know, but whatever)
Just like the first two, this chapter was written like really, really, really good. I just love reading it. Again, it feels as if Pepper is actually telling me what happened.
It doesn't feel as if someone is relaying to me a story told to them, but as if the actual Pepper is speaking to me.
I was smiling by the end, and a constant string of "Sque!" was running through my mind when Potts finally confessed her love to Tony. And when Tony said "You do" instead of something mushy and totally OOC, I just nodded. You managed to keep both Tony and Pepper very in character through the entire thing. Smashing job, mate!
This has got to be one of your best. Seriously. And all your stories are freakin' awesome, so its kinda hard to figure out which actually /is/ the best, but I'm sure this is one of them. Like I said, I love reading this fic, and I will be reading it again many times.
"Finally! Here is the end." . . . . I felt kinda sad reading that, knowing this was the end of this particular fic. It was a joy to read, brought both tears and smiles to my face, and had me seriously worried that you would make Tony go bye-bye. But since you're gonna be writting for the 100 fic challenge thing, I guess I can forgive you for ending this, 'cause I've got a lot more too look forward to. You are an excellent Pepperony authoress, 'specially for one that was against this ship not too long ago!
A few more comments before I go . . . . Smashing job, off da heezy yo, freakin' awesome, fantastico, super duper! =D
Catch ya later, homie.
~Ani |